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AshIynn

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:23 pm


No sound,
Why is it so quiet?
Why do I want to scream?

I hear no sound,
How strange,
The usual gentle breathing,
By my side,
Is missing,
Dead,
And gone

Why am I crying?
This silky wetness falling down my face,
Only to intermingle,
With the red beneath,

How strange,
How my neck burns,
As sliverly liquids,
Droop,
And drip

How tainted am I,
To be violated so,
When I look over again,
I see my lover dead

My heart is no longer beating,
I feel eyes on my back,
Such evil I feel,
Surrounding me,
Drowning me,
I want to scream,
I want to cry,
I want to be that child who knew no wrongs,
Who's only qualm is a broken toy

I look over again,
Eyes widdening,
Mouth opening into a scream,
But before a note can be echoed

Heart speeding;
Skipping a beat

And my body remains frozen,
Even to this day,
As my eyes met cold red ones,
All time for breath just,
Gone

This man only had an amused expression,
At my distress,
His hand beckoning,
As if in suduction

To my dismay,
My body reacted,
To this pale ethereal being,
Yet somehow,
Before it was too late,
I said 'no'

And then the smile was gone,
Teeth sinking in my,
Unprotected neck,
The blackness was so close,
Peace at last,
To be free from this nightmarish hell

But oh no,
For now I feel a thick liquid,
Inside my mouth,
Him telling me to 'drink'

For I too,
Shall be by his side,
For eternity,
And beyond,
Against my will

I shall never forget how,
I became this creature,
Who's only qualm is staying out of the sun and,
Drinking blood
PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 8:03 pm


It sounds a bit like how I felt when my fiance died...

Archdemonessa


CristoVII

PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:15 pm


An astounding free-verse poem, probably one of the best. You should publish this, dedicate it to people with lost loved ones.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:00 am


That sounds like the time when my little sister died after being only three days old.

PinkFrenzie


AshIynn

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:48 am


Oh that must of been hard on both of you sad

And thankyou Zweite ^^
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:48 pm


Wow. This is so beautiful and dark. heart I agree that it should be published. 3nodding

The Lady Narcissa

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