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 Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 8:23 pm
In truth, I'm quite unskilled at poems. The only thing I'm good at is putting my feelings into it.
I stare at
the brilliant armor,
the colorful tabard,
the glimmering sword,
and polished lance
Materials believed
to be essential to the knight
Despite the ignorance
Of peasant crowds
Knights must guide
the flow of honor
with a metal
yet gentle hand
Not the armor
Nor the sword
Or lance
Or a name on an official list
Makes a knight a knight
It is containing the feelings
of Honor, Loyalty, Justice
Contained in the
Manifestation of Honor itself
Behold the knight's soul
(Dedicated to: Sturm, from the Dragonlance fantasy series. [Margaret Weis, Tracuy Hickman])
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 3:47 pm
pretty good actually. you underate yourself
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:50 pm
I like it. Don't be so hard on yourself; I can tell you're pretty good at poetry.
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