Please, tell me what you think. Constructive critisizm is very welcome. Also if you see any typos please don't hesitate to inform me of them; I like to have my poems be at least semi-proffesional.
My Love, I'll Always Remember
The distant throng of quickly beating hearts,
Warming touch and thick kisses.
Something so carnal,
Produces such sparks.
Flames of sun, to the touch it is ablaze.
Soft noises and cooes, loud screaming from every lash.
Harsh, quick, soft, or descreet.
Innocence filled within every gape, then strewn to burning embers.
Such pain and tears at first it is,
Then lovingly kissed away.
With fragrant smells of ecstasy.
Such a beautiful way to become alive.
To you my love,
My heart is forever yours.
Memories of thick molassass nights,
And the snow fell from dark clouds.
Like the feathers of angels.
It landed softly on the roof of your truck with the rain.
Such a fluttering sound, tinkling as glass.
Light as a butterflies wings.
Our lullaby.
The distant throng of quickly beating hearts,
Warming touch and thick kisses.
Something so carnal,
Produces such sparks.
Flames of sun, to the touch it is ablaze.
Soft noises and cooes, loud screaming from every lash.
Harsh, quick, soft, or descreet.
Innocence filled within every gape, then strewn to burning embers.
Such pain and tears at first it is,
Then lovingly kissed away.
With fragrant smells of ecstasy.
Such a beautiful way to become alive.
To you my love,
My heart is forever yours.
Memories of thick molassass nights,
And the snow fell from dark clouds.
Like the feathers of angels.
It landed softly on the roof of your truck with the rain.
Such a fluttering sound, tinkling as glass.
Light as a butterflies wings.
Our lullaby.