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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:30 am
Lavender Skies
I escape from this world when I close my eyes To a dwelling with lavender painted skies The grass decorated with the brightest greens Which is scattered with flawed broccoli shaped trees The flowers are dyed with beautiful colors That can't be from this world, but from another But my world is tainted by an ugly troll Who regrettably has control of my soul With his brown stained teeth and yellow wrinkled skin He hobbles up to me and asks where I've been I come from a world that has no virtue And the people there have lost all self-value He asked me if that is why my lips won't curl No, I've been reduced to a scared little girl A girl with a dress so pretty, but torn But that is not the reason for my forlorn He looked through me with his peircing red eyes Well then what is the reason for your long sighs? Certain events keep coming back from my past I honestly don't know how long I can last My soul is now deformed and burns with hatred But my heart is frozen and now so ridged I will take you somewhere I assure is safe A place where your happiness cannot escape The troll hobbled up to me and took my arm I went along although I knew it ment harm I pat his shoulder to ask where we're going When he turned, I saw his red eyes glowing My trees, skies, flowers, and grass all went ablaze Even my air was crowded with a dark haze And now I am posed with a decision to make To watch my paradise burn, although it is fake Or return to my hell as I awake?
(P.S. Copy this and I will be forced to kill you... =])
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:35 am
Second time reading this, and, I love it more.
I lurves you.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:37 am
Saint Lolita Second time reading this, and, I love it more.
I lurves you. I lurves you too! Sexy picture by the way! Just don't go pretend cheating on me now! You are sure to get lots of pms from people trying to steal you from me because that picture!
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:41 am
NnyNstuff6 Saint Lolita Second time reading this, and, I love it more.
I lurves you. I lurves you too! Sexy picture by the way! Just don't go pretend cheating on me now! You are sure to get lots of pms from people trying to steal you from me because that picture! Oh, tee hee. I have more pictures for you. Har har har. cool
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 1:43 am
Saint Lolita NnyNstuff6 Saint Lolita Second time reading this, and, I love it more.
I lurves you. I lurves you too! Sexy picture by the way! Just don't go pretend cheating on me now! You are sure to get lots of pms from people trying to steal you from me because that picture! Oh, tee hee. I have more pictures for you. Har har har. cool Oh, I hope they are made especially for me! Oh dear, we have drifted far from my poem... Now no one will want to post... cry
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 12:15 pm
I loved it. Very interesting and seems to be thought out quite well.
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:37 pm
Yay! Someone commented on my first post! Thank you!! xd
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