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Neko-chan298

PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:04 pm
The night stars shone bright above them. She laid her head against him, his chest warm and comforting. "I wish we could stay like this forever..." she murmured, eyes closing. He gently ran a hand through her light brown hair. "Yuuki....." he whispered, his deep voice like a finely tuned instrument. On the frigid balcony, she curled against him even closer.


"Are you cold?" he asked. "No...not at all." Lied Yuuki, her small frame shivering to the bone, giving away her obvious falsity. He shook his head, knowing that she would refuse to go inside.


"Let me see your eyes." murmured the vampire. She looked up at him, her honey brown orbs glowed in the starlight.


Without a word spoken between the two, he leaned down and pierced her throat, sucking her sweet red blood, salty and bittersweet.


"I love you." he finally said to her, she wrapped her arms around his neck, his encircled her waist. They slept the night on that cold balcony.
 
PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:07 pm
Before anyone asked, I didn't mention the guy's name purposely, have your own fantasy of whom it might be. I like Zero and Kaname, so it doesn't matter to me ^.^ Just a one shot, if you like my writing and want me to try a story, feel free to ask. I'm working on something now, but I'm open to suggestions ^.^ C&C welcome and loved!
 

Neko-chan298


Neko-chan298

PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:05 pm
Someone......anyone!?
 
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 2:08 pm
X3 awesome! i really like. nice job 3nodding  

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Neko-chan298

PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:48 am
Xx_Haruhi_xX
X3 awesome! i really like. nice job 3nodding

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it 3nodding
 
PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:45 am
Wow, it's so dreamy...

I think you could add more actions as well, if you wanted. I mean, I could see any of the night class and Zero in this position if you really pushed it.  

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Mizuko Aquarian

PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 3:59 am
I liked it.  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 6:13 pm
*swoon* Awesome!! Incredible!! Can you please make a Kaname X Yuki fanfic? *drools*  

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 15, 2007 8:50 pm
I like the abiguity of this. Very nice.  
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 9:18 am
Nice job. I'd like it better if you'd actually use names though.  

Danieeru-San

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Elisabell-angel enraged

PostPosted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:58 am
That's really clever of you to not use names. Great descriptions.  
PostPosted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:38 pm
Elisabell-angel enraged
That's really clever of you to not use names. Great descriptions.
I agree with her. This was really good  

izu-sama


Rengirl17

PostPosted: Wed May 28, 2008 1:07 pm
I soooooooooooo loved it. I kept thinking it was Zero. who`ld you have in mind when you wrote it?? Curiosity`s gonna kill me one day lol.  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:27 pm
I loved it!! heart do some more with the same no-name-guy idea its perfect!! biggrin I'm looking foward on your stories !! Please contact me when you have some more... idk how to see when u put something on the guild.. im new redface lol.
 

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Pureblood Kaname-Sama

PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 9:19 am
Not bad.  
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