Do you see? (A poem about my parents)

[heavens_akki]

Do you see?

Have you seen the problem of it all?
Have you seen how much I fall?
Do you even see,
The pain inside of me?

When you'd scream and yell,
Everytime I fell.
Each time I've broken a little inside,
No matter how hard I've tried

I don't think you see,
The pain inside of me.
The hurt you keep sitting there,
I don't think you even care  

[OptimisticallyPessimistic]

The poem is nice. It seems a little too thought out, like the words didn't come easily. Too....structured. But it was good, all in all. And I like your quote in your signature. Very cool.  

[Wylde Style]

I really enjoyed reading that. smile Thank you for sharing with us. ^^  

[Cherished Strawberries]

I like that. It reminds me of my own parents. I think all parents are like that, actually, at some point or other.  

[GaarasOnlyLover]

I agree.