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Astral Sun

PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:17 am
I wrote this poem a few minutes ago. I can't decide what to think of it, so I'm going to let you decide for me.

Stick Figure


gender neutral humanoid form
walking around the garden
what is it doing
it’s silly
very silly


it’s not very good but I can’t draw any better
circles and lines are on the menu tonight
I drew him a background and some friends
it’s very very silly


now I give him context
add some humor
a dash of irony
sprinkle on some cynicism
and a healthy serving of slapstick
(no pun intended)


oh what’s this
it seems as though I’ve drawn a cartoon
oh deary me
but now everyone likes me
no, I made that up
everybody hates me
no, not even that
I’m so alone


at least I have my stick figure  
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 4:38 pm
Sounds like RobD making a Cyanide and Happiness cartoon to me.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:44 pm
whee That made me laugh! heart It was cute, but the rhythm seemed sort of off...or...nonexistant. ninja  
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