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The Tick of the Clock

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heavens_akki

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:28 pm
The Tick of the Clock

I hear the clock tick by
Tick Tock Tick Tock
It's a little like a lullaby
Tick Tock Tick Tock

I watch as the time moves slow
Tick...Tock...Tick...Tock...
How slow? I don't know
Tick...Tock...Tick...Tock...

Slowly it starts to fade
...Tick...Tock...
I can't hear the ticking made
...Tick....Tock...

Soon time has stopped the clock
No more tick...no more tock...
No more sound from the clock
no more tick...no more tock...  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:31 am
Sah-weet!  

TigerMisty


Mosqui

PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:46 am
Wow! Simple, and yet I really really liked it. Do you have more?  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:53 pm
Nice. It's great.  

RedKittyKat


Patron with a Mission

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 8:34 pm
Short but very good. biggrin  
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