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Xx_Murderous Doll_xX

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:05 am


I couldn't help but noticing that on the very front of our beloved guild, the winner of the "txt tlk" horror story had corrected a god-awful "txt tlk" post. What the person didn't notice, however, was that he/she missed two crucial places where he/she should have put a comma.
I have added my corrections (to the correction, no less) in red. Enjoy.
Quote:

Well, all guys are, so never mind. I need to shut the ******** up myself. ********, now I'm just off the whole ******** topic. Hey, all of you people who have MySpaces, hit me up. My email is ________@myspace.com.
 
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 9:38 am


I realize this is off-topic, but I *love* the border you have around your post! How did you do that! It's lovely!! =D

ChibiStarlet


Organic Shadows

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 10:28 am


When you click "Post reply" on the page of a topic, then you're on the reply page, there's the "Post style" button. Its default is "say" but if you click it, there's a lot of choices. The preview is the blue box on the right. See? My format is "document." Hope that helps 3nodding  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:48 pm


:'D

People who do not put commas where they need to be pisses me off.

D':

Pawsie-Incognito


GlamxShock

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 7:31 pm


Pawsie-Incognito
:'D

People who do not put commas where they need to be pisses me off.

D':

I agree.  
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:58 pm


Cool! Thank you! heart

ChibiStarlet


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:16 pm


I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this into your signature.


OP: You're correct about the lack of commas. Thank you for pointing that out. I'll correct it on the front page.

It should be "piss", not "pisses" since you're saying people piss you off.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 12:35 pm


-blinks- Good job. They also forget to capitalize the lovely wording in the second sentence.

Asher_Scree


s0prano42_x3

PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 5:40 pm


Pawsie-Incognito
:'D

People who do not put commas where they need to be pisses me off.

D':


At first, I misread this statement. I read it without the "do not," and when I realized my mistake, it made me laugh. xD
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:25 am


As long as I understand what is said, and it's spelled correctly, and punctuated so we understand it, I don't care about comma's except the crucial ones.

Example:

The student said the teacher is crazy.

"The student," said the teacher, "is crazy."

Venat the Undying


Bladeglory

Shy Werewolf

PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 9:18 pm


RainbowInjection
Pawsie-Incognito
:'D

People who do not put commas where they need to be pisses me off.

D':

I agree.

Hey, c'mon, it's an honest mistake guys.

Now if they do it on purpose or don't care at all, then it's a different matter... stare
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 7:11 pm


Being a stickler for commas can get a bit hypocritcal since comma use is probably one of the most lax rules in grammar. It only exists to create a pause, and if you're writing in a fashion where a pause will disrupt flow or change the tone it's better not to use it, even if it is technically correct. Saying "Hey you!" gives a different effect than "Hey, you!" for example, and one might want tone of the former more than the latter. At least, that's how I feel about them (putting a comma after "least" gave it more emphasis, though I didn't need it grammatically, hoho).

And anyone who has problems with excessive and inappropriate commas, do not read Victorian literature. xp

Hackney Equine


Dreaming in the Theatre

PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:22 am


Actually, I think I overuse commas.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 11:08 pm


vindicated_angel
Actually, I think I overuse commas.


Me too. I put a lot of commas in most of my sentences. Not these ones though. ^_^

Dancing_in_pink

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