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Psychotic Daizy Dukes

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 8:21 pm
This was what I believe might have been Luna's last poem that she wrote.

I don't know what's going on
I only want to say that I'm done
I don't want to fight anymore
I know this isn't what could seem to be the norm

Protect my children well
I know it's you I can tell
Just trust me, and go
You really don't have to know.

Any ideas on what it means?
 
PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 10:08 am
To be honest, I have no idea what's happened..... it's just so weird.... I think I know who she was.... I think she's the person whose fiancee died... wasn't she? Man, I remember her now.... it's so weird... I commented on her poem dedicated to him....

I think.... I know it may sound horrible.... but I think she wrote this with her death in mind.......... it certainly sounds that way........ it's odd...... it feels weird to think this could be her last work..... and it even sounds like her last.... if you know what I mean.....

It's all very distressing.... sad  

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:41 pm
eek

I shall sit and analysis this...but I don't like what I'm reading, and I hate what my mind is telling me. If you wish for me to say what I think, then go ahead and PM me, but for now, I think I shall just keep silent, for I could be wrong.  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 4:01 pm
I have a theory, but as I really didn't know her all, I don't think I can say it. I don't know what kind of person she was, therefore I can't judge what she had in mind when writing this. All I will say is that poetry is an outlet for the soul; it gives life to what a person is thinking and feeling more accurately than words alone could.  

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Psychotic Daizy Dukes

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:51 pm
I would really like ot hear everyone's theories on this, so please don't hesitate to post them. I personally have no idea what it means, other than she was planning to kill herself, but I know her too well... She wouldn't do such a thing.  
PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:41 am
I think she was lost and confused more than suicidal. If her finacee had just died, those would be more than warranted. I also think she was condemning the murderer in those last few lines, and hoping for solace from her lover's spirit. At least they're together now...  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:20 am
{Fact}

Or

{Opinion}?

"...and who are we to be but kings...

Um.
Look.
I apologize.
I have no idea what happened.
So I will just comment on the poem in a way that I probably shouldn't.
It reminded me of a video game character.
"Yuna" from "Final Fantasy X".

I'm sorry, truly..
If this is a true theory on it, I'm sorry for you're loss.
[[I've been away from the Guild.
So if this is a Guild-wide thing, I had no clue.]]


EDIT
Oh my.
...
THAT Luna?
..I'm stunned.
I can't believe it.
..in this noble game of chess..?..."
 
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