Yay.. the page was ~sort of~ on time. ^^ I was having lots of trouble getting the juices flowing but I think it came out all right. crappy background a side I think it's a good page. smile
Well, I hope you guys are happy to see that this chapter is not completely over. I'm sure lots of you thought that it would end here but nay! I have to end this one on a particularly special note and you'll be learning the names of our "invaders" soon enough!
Not much to say about this page other then I'm happy with JB's frustrated pose! He looks like he's really caught in Josh's grip! xd I think I also managed to make him tall enough. Josh is the shortest of the boys so I had to manage to have him still grab JB forcefully but not look overwhelmed. Twas a difficult task. I also left his skin darker. I figured it was about time I started to let Josh show off his rich skin color to the readers. I really need to find somone to tone for me! >_< I think I turned Josh's head a bit too much but other then that. I say, a good day's work. smile
Next Page: June 29th
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Although featured for a short time in waiting for the page... this was what I wanted to put as a bonus. smile
This is young Josh and JB! They're both about 14/15 years old in this piccy and are coming home from school. For those of you that didn't know, they've been friends since Junior high and that's all I'll say about it for now. smile If you want to see the original pencil line art (I changed things since the original that I drew in 2005) then click the link is above the picture!
Oh, and good job with that pose there, looks really convincing, although Dance doesn't look too shocked... hmm.... they've been arguing since page 42, eh? Ω
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The Kovie · Community Member · Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 10:20pm
I love JB in that last panel. Amazing page.
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Korda · Community Member · Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 05:18am
Well kovie, Dance doesn't need to be. It's not like it's her business at stake. Also, I thought it would be a bit strange if she cared as much as Bubbleh about it so it was intentional.
And JB only spotted them at that page. Who knows exactly when they started to argue. I've basically made it so that Bella and the others come out during the really heated moments. For then to get so wired up, harsh things needed to be said before they go to that stage... JB's about ready to kill.
Hehehe indeed I do. No one hurts my pride or business and gets away from it! scream I like how I look Bella even if you can't see my face! xd
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 10:41pm
whoa JB is mad....*pats JB* there there JB at the end of every movie the bad guy always loses so don't worry mrgreen CAUSE NO ONE WILL EVER BE EBTTER THEN BELLA AND YOU JB!!! scream if you want i could kick the new peoples butts wink but they do seem taller....older......stronger......stronger.....scary hmmmmmm nvm what i said sweatdrop
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Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 12:54am
Meh, I guess that's true. It seems to me that your drawings have improved since you first started... or maybe it's their outlines... Ω
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The Kovie · Community Member · Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 06:07am
nice. ^^
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Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 05:56pm
I'ma wait to start coloring until page 54. I've missed a few too many pages to be able to catch up to it before it's posted, though i might finish page 52 with a new cell shading just for the colors of the villans. i have a few colors to change even with the main characters, cuz i got them wrong when coloring page 51... XD
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KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 02:16am
Josh looks blue. whee
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xXFizzy_PantsXx · Community Member · Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 10:57pm
@ Kovie: I hope it's both! O_o It's been over 2 years since the first page. lol
I was reading the page and thinking "why is josh blue??" i understand now. biggrin oo-er JB is really angry. he shouldn't be angry unless he knows the other shop is gonna do better than them. eek again "oo-er"
Anyhoo, DUH Kovie she got better. You'd have to be blind not to notice. where you can really see it is in her commishes though. Bella has to rush to get pages out so the manga isn't the best way to see her improvement. Go to her profile to check!
And to Aposiopetic, I've seen the new page! It will be out on time for your anniversary! So everyone, be there on the 29th! It will be up 100% for sure. biggrin
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Thu Jun 28, 2007 @ 01:05am
Aaa! I didn't mean to insult you if I did. Sorry, Miss Bella. crying
Umm... Toning would be better if you used it as shading and left room for highlights or maybe you could shade his skin in lineart more before you tone?
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shiyonin · Community Member · Thu Jun 28, 2007 @ 05:11am
niceness!!! ^__^ coming along nicely. i can tell you one thing though... the yelling face that Josh made 2 pages back looked kinda funny.. and JB's face here... it's not as awkward... but there's something about it... it's the area of his mouth and nose... and that right eye seems a little too high. but over all the pages look great!!! keep it up!!
^__^ keep me up dated... since you don't have a drect link to your comic in your siggy anymore, it's hard getting here as often... T-T
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 09:17pm
DELETE
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 09:21pm