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Vulpes Vendetta
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 03:55am

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	Poem::.:: Lady of the Meadow A slender figure in the meadow Dressed in green With a little pink hat Dancing in the wind Beautiful and calming Its sweet scent Luring odd men Dressed in yellow and black Soon frozen in beauty To die and wither away

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Shigatsu Suno
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Commented on: Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 05:08am


	I like the idea, but the last three lines are random and don't match up very well. Where did the last two lines come from? Overall, I think it's pretty good. But the lines are slightly juvenile and could use some flow. ^^

Commented on: Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 02:50am


	well, you have to know what he's writing about, which I know, and if you couldn't tell, it was a poem involving personifacation and nothing else. I think it's cute how you got a lady out of your writing subject..........but I'm not gonna say becasuase if people can't tell then they're not smart. I like it heart

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