Wow! I actually pulled it off. Who would have thought that a night of insomnia would pay off! lol (No seriously guys, insomnia is AWEFUL! I felt like hurling so bad since I didn't sleep. That's a wierd reaction in insonmia but I digress...)
HOLY COW! The action has begun with a capital 'A' and it looks like Alba can hold his own! But I don't think I've ever drawn Bon Clay so... well... happy. lol This is my first fight page EVER and I hope you guys enjoy it! I'm personally pleased with how it came out! The sound effects are probably the only thing that bug me about the page. I'm not really sure if I used the right fonts for them. confused Also, making that spinning shoe was a bit of a challenge. I just hope that I pulled off the effect. biggrin*crosses fingers*
Well, if I get everything straightened out this week, I'll be going back to school after Labor Day! (Canadian Holiday) So the pages might start coming a bit slower until I get my schedule organized. Remember guys EVERYTHING except the fonts and the speed lines are done by hand by me! (mostly cause I have a crappy mouse and no idea how to use computer programs for tones and other useful things... >_>wink So it might just take me longer depending on the time I have. Worry not though, for the pages will not stop! This much I promise you!
EDIT: Sorry, Changing the date Next Page: October 7th I'm trying to pop these out as fast as I can!
To All readers! Please try to get your friends to read this! I want to cause enough of a stir to get my journal put in the Featured Journal section on Gaia. So the more peeps that know and comment on my manga the more attention I will get. So tell everyone, that if they like this they should comment! I've met people who say they read but have never posted a comment. So maybe this will encourage them to! Also, if any one knows HOW to get this on featured journal then please PM me to tell me. lol
If anyone is interested in TONING! If you are and want to help me make this manga even BETTER then please PM me with samples and how you would tone one of my pages. I now have no gold to offer for this help. It would would be completely voluntary. Thank you for your interest.
~*Bella*~
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o.o things are heating up, yes? that last panel of Bon Clay looks really nice =3
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The Kovie · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 01:19am
ooo wonder what will happen!!!
no not the 5th!!! bad things are due on that day
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Darpie · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 02:44am
awesome!!!! gonk this is great bella!! keep up the good work!
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Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 03:54am
How dare Bon Clay! Good on Alba for protecting himself. Bon Clay is almost dashing in how he is drawn in that bottom panels.
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Korda · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 04:22am
Yaaay!
Interesting shading effects on the first panel. Lightly shadowed, gives me a kind of feeling of dread as he gets behind Alba. Fortunately, Alba's quick on his feet and blocked. biggrin
Nicely done, Bella!
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euclids_triangle · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 04:33am
Okay, I know a lot of people say this when they see your most recent page but this really is your best page yet! I mean, the line quality on every panel is just great! Awesome action too! biggrin
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 03:49pm
Yayyyyyy good work !!! GO Alba GO !!!
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Alicia Lestrange · Community Member · Mon Oct 01, 2007 @ 05:26pm
looking good!!! i love the expressions they make on the last two panels!!
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Tue Oct 02, 2007 @ 08:39pm
Hey, Sorry gang but I'm changing the date for an extra 2 days. I'm going to be pretty busy after all.
WOAH! NICE PAGE Su~ TT^TT i wish i could draw like you TT^TT
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ClassicFAIL_TM · Community Member · Thu Oct 04, 2007 @ 10:03pm
love the anatomy in this one. alba's face in the second to last panel looks really nice for some reason. >w<
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Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Fri Oct 05, 2007 @ 12:08am
Text to go before each message Tightness. You are the best manga writer on gaia.Text at the end of each message
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Velocity Man · Community Member · Fri Oct 05, 2007 @ 03:50am
GJ Bella, looks good as always. Fight scenes ftw.
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Hex Kor · Community Member · Fri Oct 05, 2007 @ 03:59pm
I like the first panel and the last two panels! Alba is so cool! ~♥ I agree with you on Bonclay, you did a really good job with him on this page.
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shiyonin · Community Member · Sat Oct 06, 2007 @ 03:30pm
even though i half-left gaia, I still read your manga, I love it keep it up! biggrin
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Aeshin · Community Member · Sat Oct 06, 2007 @ 06:48pm
Waaaaaaaa!! Sorry for not commenting! But this is the best page I agree! crying I'll comment on the next one!! Alba and Bonclay are so dashing!eek
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Shinja_Mizuno · Community Member · Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 09:54pm
I figured I might as well comment here.
GUESS WHAT??
I found this Manga on the HOME PAGE. That's right. Your Journal is featured. surprised
I. Love. It.
I haven't stopped reading since I ran into it (which is bad for me 'cause I've got homework to do xD) and that is great for you! 8D idk whether it's done or not (since I'm only on page 6cool but I'm looking forward to reading more. It's so fun! :3
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Sashakrispies · Community Member · Tue Apr 21, 2009 @ 02:09am