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	~B.O.W.B.S. Official Manga!~ Brought to you by Bent on Wonton Bubble Shading - Art Shop!

	"Ch. 4 - The Rival Shop" - Pg. 72
	"Ch. 4 - The Rival Shop" - Pg. 72


You are on page 72. If you've missed pages just go back to Ch.1, Ch.2, Ch.3 or the beginning of Ch.4. Belladona Nightshade · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 02:34am · 19 Comments


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	Announcement! Yay! I did it! O_o Wow... I pumped this one out quickly! Looks like Alba got hit pretty badly! What will happen next?! I know you're all biting your nails to find out... but sadly, I'll be forced to tease you once again, and delay this page for November 7th! The reason why, is cause the next page will be a special Halloween page! biggrin Well, I was surprised about how little time this took! Especially since I went with a dynamic kick! biggrin I did used a reference for it though... but I still could have totally wrecked it! >_> I know I said I'd do more backgrounds but there was too much going on in this page! (I swear I'm not making excuses!) NEXT PAGE WILL FEATURE BOWBS COMMENTARIES! Last chance to get your questions in! 1 Question per person! SPECIAL HALLOWEEN PAGE! Next Page:The 31st of October ~~ To All readers!* Please try to get your friends to read this! I want to cause enough of a stir to get my journal put in the Featured Journal section on Gaia. So the more peeps that know about my manga the more attention I will get. So tell everyone, that if they like this they should comment, recommend and spread the word! I've met people who say they read but have never posted a comment. So maybe this will encourage them to! Also, to get my journal in the Featured Journal section PLEASE select the recommend button under "Gaia Journal" up top of your journal options. ~~ If anyone is interested in TONING!* If you are and want to help me make this manga even BETTER then please PM me with samples and how you would tone one of my pages. I now have no gold to offer for this help. It would would be completely voluntary. Thank you for your interest. ~~ BOWBS Thread* For news, info and discussion of BOWBS manga, please click on the link and join the fun! I'll also be answering questions there as well, do feel free to subscribe and discuss with other BOWBS readers. smile *~Bella~* Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 02:35am


	WOOOT!! FIRST COMMENT!!! your fight scene are awesome!! keep it up bella! mrgreen Offline Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 03:23am


	WHOA!! ALBA'S HIT ALBA'S HIT!! Omg! 0.0 Can't wait for the special Halloween page!! :3 Offline XvXYuNiEXvX · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 03:38am


	That kick is so dynamic, I almost feel like he's coming out toward me! Really well done clothing wrinkles in the last panel. It was a good choice not to put backgrounds. The action is in the forefront this way, making it more heightened. Especially with all your good usage of those lines. 3nodding Offline yukidream13 · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 04:11am


	The flow from the last page to this one confuses me slightly. I think in the previous page you get a sense of them slowing down the fight and then in this one it's just an over whelming sense of IN YOUR FACE! Seeing it as a seperate page and not as a whole line of pages though, very well done. You said you aren't making exuses about the backgrounds and for this page for sure I believe you. Namely because there's no real appropriate spot for a background on this page. The action is sow prominent, and well drawn ^_^ that if you were to add a background to the one possible spot I think it would actually make the page look messy and far to overwhelming. Congrats on another page well delivered Bella ^_^ Offline Korda · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 06:22am


	Yeah I know. I mentionned in the last announcement how I'm not really happy with the procession of pages. It would serve me right to rearrange them or add more intermediate pages... but I have to the get the story moving and I don't want to make this chapter that much bigger then the others... >_> Also, the flashback wasn't planned... it's just something I added like that. Which is why it disturbs the story a bit. sad I'll probably fix the order or something later on... but just bear with me for now. ^_^;;; *~Bella~* Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 04:36pm


	yaaay!! very nicely done!! Offline MrNailVT · Community Member · Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 07:25pm


	mmm, not looking good for Alba... wonder how this'll all end... Offline The Kovie · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 12:14am


	I really love this manga!!! <3 Offline PanChan · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 09:36am


	WAH!! Alba!! Note on Bon Clay: He looks like he's doing a spin kick which would mean his hair is currently swishing the wrong way... If he was doing a spin kick, his hair would be pushing left (from our point of view). Aw... The last pannel is greatly drawn but it makes me sad to see Alba in pain... Oops. I asked to many questions... Sorry! I'll the post the one I most dearly want answered. Edit: For the time being: 3. If we wanted to see some of your older/other work (writing wise or comic wise), what/where would we need to do/go? The other's shall be asked on future commentaries.... Offline shiyonin · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 04:38pm


	Oh ouch! That did look like a good kick! I also like Kiba and Alba's profiles! Well, actually I like the whole page. xp Halloween page? You didn't tell me about that! xd Can't wait to see what you have in store for the BOWBS Crew! wink Offline Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 05:19pm


	O_o faints Nnoooooooooooo! I have to wait 2 weeks to find out what happens! gonk Oh well... crying Offline Shinja_Mizuno · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 05:36pm


	AH! I haven't posted in forever!! crying I haven't been on gaia lately and i'm sorry i didn't. sweatdrop NOOO!! ALBAAAAAA.... crying crying He KICKED him. He KICKED HIM IN THE CHEST. Betch. Offline PenguinsStealMySanity · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 05:53pm


	ack! i wasn't on to comment on the other page, but WOW! i love your commentary thing!! i wanna listen to more ^^ this chapter is getting more action-y and interesting. love it love it love it. mrgreen Offline Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 07:35pm


	Wow! this is so cool! o.o I want to know what happens next! whee Offline L o v e l y N o t e _ · Community Member · Sat Oct 27, 2007 @ 11:49pm


	WoW! This page is so ACTION-Y!!!! High jump kicks ftw! Offline Hex Kor · Community Member · Mon Oct 29, 2007 @ 05:19am


	Ack! No! My poor Alba! -hits BonClay- Bad BonClay! I can't wait for the next page! Halloween is the best day in the world, and I love it! W00t! I love you, Bell-Bell! Offline KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Mon Oct 29, 2007 @ 08:40pm


	NO MORE QUESTIONS PAST THIS POINT! So that's that! I still hope I get more comments though! Remember everyone to recommend this journal and tell others! *~Bella~* Offline Belladona Nightshade · Community Member · Tue Oct 30, 2007 @ 06:12am


	OTL I didn't even realize that Alba was hit cuz there wasn't a panel with the actual connection. feels dumb Offline Kiyoko Amaya · Community Member · Thu Apr 23, 2009 @ 02:09am

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