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Alrial Hero Of Doom


HatakeChiyo
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My Story Part 8
Alrial was frozen into place, like deer on a highway as oncoming headlights drawn near. She stopped Breathing.

*Thwack* A stick hit Alrial on the head and *plopped* down into the water like quicksand.

"What are you doing staring at that harmless mud-eater, don't you hear the calls of the flesh eater?" The Priest yelled grabbing her by the arm and trying to pull her to move.

"What do you mean Thats the flesh eater look at it!!!!!" Alrial said pointing at the creature.

The creature stood still finally noticing its audience. Its eyes widened and it ran back into the shelter of the swamp trees. "Yeah, thats the flesh eater, a whimpering Maldblad. Pff those creatures scare themselves with their own reflection, much less nibble on us humans.........."

The calls of the flesheaters was deafening. They had finally arrived, and wouldn't shut Up!!. "Too late to run now," The priest whispered commencing to whisper out his mantra.

"That's not going to help, throw a stick at them, you do it all the time to me. GET UP!!!

Suddenly there was silence.





User Comments: [2]
Raniik
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Fri Jan 11, 2008 @ 01:34am


xd not bad, not bad at all, starting to get sucked into the story


icey_princess14
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Thu Feb 07, 2008 @ 03:32am


i like ur story


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