People on FF.N The Pit of Voles confuse me.
Maybe I'm not a clear writer or something, but I thought it was obvious who was with who in Warped Mirrors. Someone posted a review, on chapter *12*, asking for me to clear up which sibling went with which.
Um... huh?
HOW did you get that far into the story and not figure it out? There's only *three* "Edwards" and *three* "Alphonses!" While that might seem a bit confusing, let me point out that one set is female and has different names ... Edana and Alanza. So that just leaves two Edwards and two Alphonses. One set is the "original" set, and the others are switched ... aka Alphonse has the automail and Edward is bound to the armor.
When I write interactions with the automail!Alphonse, I always make sure to refer to things he's doing ... eating, running a hand through his hair, shrugging out of a coat ... that the armor!Alphonse CAN'T DO. Apparently, this is too subtle for people.
*flails and mashes head into screen* MAKE SENSE, DAMN YOU!
I have gotten some reviews that amuse me. The "Edana is *so* Edward" one cracks me up because, hey, that's the point. And the same person reviewed a later chapter with something like "That's Ed, outsmarting himself." At least SOMEONE gets it.
*sighs* Well, they'll get things cleared up soon, because after a few chapters of madness staying in one location, all three sets split up to follow leads. It's just ... AUGH. Irritation. *makes sure to make things DOUBLY clear in the revision*
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