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Dreams of a broken soul
dragon's scares # 11 the end
The three women cry "out please stop please dear god!!!" cry cry crying crying
Our hero smile up at them and says "I knew the day that I came back here would be my last day alive."He coffs up blood but still puts his soft warm smile on. The three women say "stop talking you will die faster!!"they all have huge tears in their eyes. All the towns people even the mayor turn to the mayor's on and throw him out in to a part of the forest around the town known to be over run with demons and wolfs. Now back to our hero where he place both hand on one of the two young women cheeks and said"I love you both and I wish you a long life of happyness." the two women grab his hands crying into them as our hero breaths his last and his hand go lip. The two women cry out NOOOO!!! The two women barry their faces in his chest cring their eyes out but as soon as there tears hit our heros bear skin his body becomes star dust and is carried off in the wind. The two young women and his mother whatch as the dust floats away with tears in their eyes with no stop.

Two years pass and we're back in the small town where our hero lived and died. Then we see our to young women walking the street shopping for food and spices,then we move out to the top of the mesa where we see a cloaked figure pull down his hood the wind kicks up and blows the figures silver white hair in front of his face and all you can see is a soft warm smile.

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  • User Comments: [5]
    Yomekia
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    Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 08:43am


    for a minute there I thought he had died.but now I know he didn't and I feel so much better.but there has to be a sequel to this story.....please don't make me beg because you know I will.You must write more. 3nodding


    tidus_sakura_chi
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    Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 09:17am


    A simple ending, reminds me a bit of Pirates of The Carribean, not so difficult, you can draw out a line of what you think might happen, but the mystery is still out there. It leaves you in awe.


    Glow Stick Mosh Pit
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    Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 05:17pm


    O.O Whoa... That was way good. I don't even know how to describe how good it was... **is speechless**


    earthy001
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    Thu Aug 11, 2005 @ 05:24am


    heart gonk gonk heart cry cry aaawwwwww!!


    Guardian of Fire 666
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    Tue Aug 16, 2005 @ 09:19pm


    eek Wow, you're really good at this short story stuff. You got me crying while reading it. That's a sign of a good writer, get the reader acting a certain way. Er, I have comments and suggestions for your writing in general, I dunno if you want to hear them or not. 3nodding


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