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bajanshortys words it's sad!


bajanshorty
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You try your hardest to make them proud
You learn what they want
Try what they say
And never look back
You think they love you and are proud
But when it comes to that nothing is heard
nothing is seen
Nobody says or feels
Nobody shows you whats real
They just let you sit there and believe
That they truly love you
But they don't know you see
The disappointment
The tears
The fact the don't want you to know the truth
Only lies to conceal what they really feel
But it's time to give up
I don't want the lies, cries, fame or playing these games
Just tell me I want to hear those words
I want your encouragement
I need your love
Please why won't you give me what i need, what i want?
I try and i try to please you
You dont seem to notice
I try to be smart you say "Ok but.."
I try to sing and you dont approve you cant make it
Well now i don't know what else to do i'm tired of trying i dont know what else you expect of me
I cant do it at all anymore.






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Candy-Senpai
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Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 05:17pm


I liked the other one better. But this is still amazing. Even though I know your work probably expresses your feeling, try branching out more. I think you should get your work published :3 mrgreen


Tainted Vag
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 03:14am


That's deep Venessa.
It sounds that it has something to do with your parents.


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