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update on ch.3... and a possible 4th chapter... |
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u may now go on ff.net and look up 'Trouble on the Plane'... hitoko-sama (jimmyloserface) was the one who put it on my account (bc i dont have the right format to do it myself) and is my beta... so be nice to her...
anyways....
anyways, the warnings still apply from last time. so,yea.
"this is spoken out loud." 'this is talking to themselves.' (this is their inner personality. as well as, their fights with their inner self.)
I don't pwned Naruto, nor will I ever. T.T
alright, I'll shut up and type away now......
*still in Orochimaru's pov*
'Hmm,...but is he just being an overprotective brother, or is there more to him? (that is the question.)
'Ah, s**t.' Of course, every time I'm trying to have a train of thought about something, that voice just HAS to butt in and say his two cents.
But who is he, well I actually... don't know.
Hmm,...come to think of it, when DID that voice start appearing.'
*While Orochimaru is still debuting with himself; this is what is happening in the real world.*
*change of pov*
¬¬ Itachi's pov ¬¬
"Oh, so THAT'S what was happening, huh?"
I had said that to Sasuke in a slightly pissed off but icy tone of my voice.
(But, how I still managed that I don't know.)
▐▐Sasuke's pov▐▐
'Oh s**t! He's getting REALLY pissed now.'
Was the first thought that came to my mind.
And all that I that hoped for, is that he doesn't try to kill everyone in sight, or threatens to punish me.
╖╖Orochimaru's pov╖╖
'Hmm, I wonder who's gonna talk first?'
(Because, the suspense is KILLING ME, HAHAHAHA!!!)
'Ah s**t. It's you again; I though you said, you had to take a nap' I questioned him about that.
(I already did and didn't)
'What do you mean?' How could you do both?
(I am you, actually I'm a part of yourself.)
'You are...a part of me?' What the hell do you mean?'
(I mean, exactly what I said, I'm a part of you.)
'What do YOU MEAN?' I, then, had half a mind to check myself to see if there was any evidence that something had happen.
(I'll give you a hint; it's mentally)
'No, you're lieing.' How dare he lie to me!
(I'm not and your agrueing with yourself, stupid.)
'What did you call me.' Oh, no, you didn't!
(Oh wait, you're not stupid, you're a complete dumbass.)
'Damn you, straight to hell and back, you dumbass ********.'
(...Are you drunk again?) ((Honestly, this dude's too easy to piss off.))
'No, I'm at the airpor-wait where's Sasuke and Itachi?'
(Kukuku, right now, Itachi is presently chasing Sasuke after, he refused to clean their whole house everyday, for 31 days.)
'Nnnoooooo, Sasu-chan, come back to me. I'll protect you from the evil monsters under your bed!!!!!'
(......You're just proving my point; you're a complete dumbass.)
'******** you' How dare he call me a dumbass!
(No, thanks; I'll pass. I rather not ******** you. Besides, I have never slept with a dumbass before and I don't intend on breaking my record, just yet.)
'...WHAT DO YOU MEAN? YOU SLEPT WITH A DUMBASS BEFORE? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I WONDER WHO WAS THE UNLUCKY FOOL,...NOT! HAHAHAHA!!!'
(...I'm not even gonna bother pointing out the irony here.)
'What irony?'
(You know what? Nevermind, what I said earlier. You're nothing short of a complete and total dumbass.)
'WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL MEEEEE!!!!!'
(this part below was written in july)
*change of pov*
*sasuke's pov*
'But aniki, I dont even know how to clean a house!' Sasuke whined to his brother who is still chasing him...
Or was, anyways...
Sasuke then trips over someone's foot, taht someone who was sitting close to Orochimaru, in which caused Sasuke to fall in Orochimaru's lap.
*quick change of pov; Orochimaru*
'Oh ******** yo-' Wait... What's this? I feel something warm on my lap... I look down and it's Sasuke-chan.
"Sasuke-chan, what a pleasant surprise to see you." 'A very nice surprise to be on my lap...Hehehehe...'
*back to Sasuke's pov*
'This did NOT happen...I did not just fell into Orochimaru's lap.' I know that I must be blushing... I just hope no one notices...
*thrid person's pov*
Itachi turned the corner just in time to see Sasuke fall on Orochimaru...
"OROCHIMARU, HANDS OFF MY OTOUTO!" Itachi screamed to Orochimaru.
*Itachi pov*
After saying that, I walked over to where my poor otouto was on Orochimaru's lap as calmly as I could, and took my otouto off of Orochimaru's lap.
"Now, otouto. Just for doing that, I'm going to make you not only clean the house completely, I also want you to cook every meal for me, unless I say no, for a whole TWO MONTHS."
"Now, is that clear, Sasu-chan?"
Sasuke then nods his head.
"Good, then go over to where our luggage is, and keep an eye on it." I then order to my otouto...
Though, I wouldn't order him to jump off a bridge.
'HE'S MINE, DAMNIT!' He just doesn't know it yet...
*quick pov; Sasuke's*
'Damnit, now I got more work to do when we get home...' I sigh in defeat.
*back to Itachi pov*
I then turn my attention to Orochimaru...
"Orochimaru... What were you about to do to my otouto?" I asked him.
Orochimaru reply, "Well, I was gonna hug him and squeeze him, and call him 'Koi'. Why? Is that illegal?"
I am getting angry with him,"He is no ONE'S koi!"
I then b***h-slap the b*****d.
"And stay away from him, you Micheal Jackson wanna-be!"
I then run to where my otouto is..
melody726is91badass · Tue Jul 08, 2008 @ 03:20pm · 0 Comments |
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