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whatever i feel like
don't my feelings count?
you take reapeated stabs at my heart,
expecting awnsers right away,
not knowing that you are tearing it apart,
you think that i am okay,

you block my way with your anger,
spitting acid from your mouth,
i did not know this kind of danger,
nor that i had to make an ouath,

how many times must i hear you say,
that you want me to stop,
by monday, tuesday, or even wednsday,
do you want me to explode like shaken up pop?

i zip my lips,
so as not to cause a scene,
there's too much to fix,
no where left to lean,

on the skytrain with no one by my side,
tears overflow from my eyes,
this is a train where no one knows what i feel inside,
are they thinking, "has she no pride." ?






User Comments: [1]
Anolinde
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 @ 09:54pm


Yes your feeling count hun....to those that care about you, like me biggrin Besides the innitial sadness of this poem I felt when I read it, this is very very well done...I think tis my new favorite....and I can relate too.....keep making those awesome poems babe <3 Loves yoo whee


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