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	Runesongs My original work. Enjoy, and I appreciate comments!

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The gleam that leaves Interchangeable dreams Sliding beads Of light on a web The web that stays In its quivering place Does not fade As other dreams ebb Now could I place The thin mantle of rays Guide and frame Without breaking strand To bring the beads Of those glistening dreams T'slide on lee Into waiting hands [[ Lemme just say that purposely trying to write with assonance instead of rhyme when rhymes keep coming to mind is . . . a challenge. ]] [R]unesong · Mon Oct 24, 2005 @ 06:15pm · 1 Comments


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	Ooooh....me likey. Mookilicious! The third stanza is awesome. Love the wording, and great imagery. It's a very...delicate? piece. Impwessive...as Homestar would say...if he...uh...read poetry. Yes! YAY! POETRY! biggrin Offline darth.chel · Community Member · Tue Oct 25, 2005 @ 05:20pm

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