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The Dark Cornor Of Life It's a book I'm writing Please leave comments about things I should change.


Beautiful_Sight1
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Chapter One The Begining
Thursday 24th July 1997 12:35pm

It had been a tiring day so far for a women who has just given birth to a new child. The light was shining in though a window in the London General Hospital on to a baby , a baby as perfect as the summer’s day outside. The women held her baby in pride and said ‘ I will call her Summer for she is as beautiful as the day outside’. The baby did not cry nor did it kick it’s legs and women spoke with a soft tone to her voice ’This is the best baby anyone could wish for so silent so fragile I will never let her go’.

Such a proud mother? She will never let her go? An adoption agencies owner didn’t think that for a second as she answered a knock on a door only to find a baby laying on a doorstep with a blanket for production from the cold and a note saying:
Her name is Summer she is born on the 24th of July 1997 please care for her.
With no one around it was Summer’s new home.


Thursday 24th July 2008

Today it was Summer’s 11th birthday just like the day she was born on it was a wonderful day outside and she was having the time of her life as her ‘parents’ spoilt her rotten with gifts but soon they were going to destroy her life and kill there friendship with Summer.

Later that day while Summer and her parents were having a birthday tea Summer made an announcement ’when I older I want to be a Doctor and save peoples lives!’ Her parents were pleased for her but they told Summer they also had an announcement to make and now Summer has a new ambition to find her real mother and father.


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Ice princess Carrie
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Wed May 13, 2009 @ 10:17pm


Hello,

It's a really good story, I hope you'll continue it soon. If I may give one suggestion as a fellow writer: Try to make shorter sentences. If you make long sentences you start making mistakes. I know that out of own experience. I really hope that you will continue this.

Greetings Carrie


thedarkbeing
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Mon Nov 02, 2009 @ 02:45am


I like the story :3
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