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I am simply writing of a girl who has no way of ever being accepted by society unless she is mean. She tries hard to make people happy but in the end she is hurt. Neil is also a character who is spoiled and does not appreciate life.
Deliah Part 1
As the setting sun starts to disappear over the mountain peaks, and the chirping of the birds die down in the forest a small town starts to quiet down as they all close up shop and begin to put away all unsold merchandise. A young girl maybe around 17 sat near the town fountain located in the middle of the town. Her soft white hair and magnetic blue eyes seemed almost perfect. She stares at her hands that seem to look all beaten up. Her day was harsh. She helped everyone in the town and could not say no to them. She watched as some blood trickled down from her palm to her dirt white dress. She gave a faint sigh and put on a smile. "It will pay off sooner or later," she said in a cracking voice. She looked around and seemed to almost be amazed in how fast everyone closed shop. She heard rustling coming from a near by tavern. A tavern wench exits the tavern hitting away a few hands reaching towards you. "Aye! Deliah com' ere'," she shouted at the girl. With no hesitation Deliah picked herself up and walked to the wench. "Are you doing anything tonight?" Deliah shook her head. "No mam'." The wench grinned. "Good. You can elp' me serve these no good pests."
Deliah knew she was risking alot. She was young and a virgin and the men in the tavern were drunk and twice her size. "Aye mam'," she said in a shakey voice,"ill elp'.

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commentCommented on: Sat May 02, 2009 @ 01:22am
thats sort of sad for deliah crying if she wuz id give somethin or at least a hug...

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