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The One
I've been askin myself the same question over and over.
Why cant I find that special someone thats meant just for me?
The one that's the other half of my heart?
Why does other s have this special some one?
Like sun has summer,
Moon has night
Rain has thunder,
Cold has winter,
And the Earth has them all.
Like a fairy tale beginning but you never get the happily-ever after.
So I often wonder if I'm just afraid, afraid to love.
But if I'm afraid to love, how will I ever find the one?
How is it when I get close to love, love runs away?
Its like it knows I'm not ready, not good enough for that one.
How come its like this?
Why cant I find that special one?
Its like you come to the end of the journey, but the path doesn't show.
Outside I'm smilin,
But inside I'm crying.
So I often wonder if I'll ever find true love,
Like Sun has summer,
Moon has night
Rain has thunder,
Cold has winter,
So tell me how will I ever find the one,
How will I ever find the love?
How will I ever find the love?
How?






User Comments: [3]
Zuvios Gemini
Community Member





Sat Dec 12, 2009 @ 10:48pm


D: that's sad. crying


Foxless
Community Member





Mon Dec 14, 2009 @ 06:27am


i know what you mean....most of the girls i go out with really dont have anything in common with me i fake being happy but shouldnt...i just give every girl a chance ..great poem u should add some guitar to it i get an evanesence singing type to this sad great art u made.


Peasley
Community Member





Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 08:45pm


What a beautiful message. As I've said before, I'm not much into free verse, but I can deal with it. I loved the comparisons you made; they really emphasized the speaker's loneliness. Keep writing!


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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