Wheeeeeeeeeeee! I did this one with tons of dialogue in my head and I realized it left me no room for background! O_o I feel it's a bit cluttered but this is actually the second to last part of the first chapter! That's right folks, the next page will close chapter 1!crying
It's been a good run for the last year but hopefully, I'll be able to move alot faster now! 3nodding I have a bit more confidence and I'll be pushing forward! *yeah!* Well, enough of my yammer.. I know what everyone wants to hear about... the list of the 15 contestants that made into the BOWBS FIRST CUSTOMER CONTEST! xd
15! Crazy huh? But don't worry folks, you'll all get a chance to prove yourselves!
Next Page:the 16th of MAY
Here are the names of the participants that have made it into the contest! xd
Now that you've gone through the manga and commented on the pages, you have proved to me that you have read it!
What I want from you all now is to write me an approximately 200 - 300 word paragraph on why you think you should be in BOWBS Manga.
Sort of a mini interview of what you think your Avi can contribute to the story and why you think that you should be in it. Discribe your personality, how you would interact with the other characters and why you would go to BOWBS for a commission. DO NOT invent a story about you in BOWBS. I DO NOT WANT A STORY. That is very important!
exclaimBe reminded that your role is not permanent but you will be involved with all the characters and the running of the business! So don't go saing that you'll be good to use in a plot point or something!
I want that short paragraph Pmed to me by Monday the 15th before the end of the day... meaning 11:59am Eastern Standard time or earlier. I'll place the results on Tuesday. In the pages.
Write on the subject box: BOWBS CONTEST
The 10 most convincing will be held for the next round! I do not expect a literary masterpiece. I just want honesty and literacy. If english is not your first language then you can find someone to help you with your spelling and grammer but by ALL MEANS write it yourself. I will have no ghost writers in this contest!
yay, a new page and I love how JB wants the beer but he's not allowed to have it, even though he is legal. idea
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Julina Lynch · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 05:02am
Poor JB... XD... What's Bubbleh got to say? -waits anxiously- Oh wait.... that's not Bubbleh that said that...idea
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KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 05:40am
What? I don't get beer? What the hell? lol. I'm 21 in this darnit! Damn you Josh! :lifts first: And Bubbleh doesn't have to be scared of lil' ol' me! twisted lol. I'm happy she's in our team... since we can start making gold. ninja :$: I likeys the second pannel Bella! Also, the outline of me!
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 06:06am
Its funny how he goes from serious to Wee biggrin happy o.o
and oh the suspense -_-
cant wait for next one idea
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Thdark · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 07:20am
Its funny rofl awesome details as always, i really like reading this! heart
Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 09:02pm
Eeeps! I new chapter! Huzzah! Ooo, I wonder what the last thing is... the clowns better not be back. *cringe* idea
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Tue May 09, 2006 @ 09:47pm
JB and beer? Now thats scary. xd I better start on that paragraph now, I am a horrible writer who likes to take her time. sweatdropidea
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AnaChi · Community Member · Wed May 10, 2006 @ 12:46am
God, he's intense! I really love all your characters. I can't even decide who my favorite is. mrgreenidea
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Nicco Nightstar · Community Member · Wed May 10, 2006 @ 02:35pm
i-i shall try my hardest!!!! for the essay thing i mean... i'm actually pretty ok with things like that... so i'l get right to work on it! YAY!!!
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Wed May 10, 2006 @ 05:55pm
Good luck guys! Have fun.. ermm... writing essays! lol! beer. ^^
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[Mochi] · Community Member · Wed May 10, 2006 @ 11:23pm
JB and Josh are cute <3.
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Hana Maehata · Community Member · Sun May 14, 2006 @ 05:49am
Aghhh! I was waiting forever today to get on the comp to see the next page but it's the 15th!! gonk I can't wait to tomorrow!! *waits* xp
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Rai Asukai · Community Member · Tue May 16, 2006 @ 12:55am
Did Josh's outift change? o.o), Maybe not. I should go check that... Later though. I'm playing catch-up. 3nodding I love the panel of JB-Bubbleh interaction. Intsensity-Oh-s**t. And then... YES! xd: JB is so funny. whee
Bubbleh looks like she feels doomed in the last panel. I donno what's on the next page yet, so maybe she is, but it gives me a 'bad feeling' for the group, as a reader. Know what I mean?
Second to last panel, "I want beer!" I can't tell who the characters are. I'm assuming Alba wants beer and JB says no, as that seems most in character so far.
...Gods. I LOVE the intensity in JB's eyes in the second panel. xd: It's awesome!
My only other comment is that you change your gutter layout a lot. I think I'm more aware of it since taking a comics & graphic novels course. It's definitely not something I'm used to, but I like it. 3nodding Keep it up.
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Sun May 21, 2006 @ 06:11am
The last frame is THE BEST! I love it. You did so well in showing the emotion that I can almost feel it! I really enjoy how you did the mouth and you did it all anatomically correct!
Beer....gosh, that's funny. I love the characters already.
kyoko jun · Community Member · Tue Apr 21, 2009 @ 03:20am
~Love Me~ That picture where JB is asking Mizz who she is could so easily be turned into a love scene. They're so close. >//////<
And immature adults ARE THE WORLD'S FLOCK OF GEESE! THE VENISON ON THEIR TABLE! WHAT WOULD WE DO WITHOUT THEE OH HOLIDAY HAM???!
I gain more admiration for JB as each frame goes by.
~Please Click Us~
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Kuramasan · Community Member · Tue Apr 21, 2009 @ 08:19am
Finally figured it out! In the third panel, JB reminds me of Gokudera (from Katekyo Hitman Reborn!). whee Actually, personality-wise, they're also kinda alike too. xd
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Kiyoko Amaya · Community Member · Thu Apr 23, 2009 @ 02:38am