Wow... this page was alot more work then I had planned for it to be. A side from layout problems to lettering issues, this should have been done about 3 days earlier had it not been for all the annoyances and problems! I like the page though I'm not particularly proud of it. I see a bunch of layout problems but I just felt like I had to get this out ASAP or else my brain would explode from the worry and the lateness. Plus... after changing so many things.. I sort of got sick of looking at it. lol
YAY! It's Josh! heart Haven't seen him in a while right? He's still as cute a ever but it looks like his gut is telling him that there's something amiss! ninjaSnow Tiger seems to have these crazy ninja like skills which I had planned on using since I saw her outfit. ^_^ I hope you like it Snow and happy be-lated birthday if I'm too late.
I have to draw more perspective. That really punches up a page and I have learn not to draw this late... my eyes are so blurred I can't really see much of what I'm doing! burning_eyes Well, I hope you like this none the less and soon... Operation Crispy will be in place! See ya then!
haha! xd take ur time Bella! don't rush! the longer it takes the better it looks and the more heart is put into it 3nodding ....man i sound like one of those old philosopher ppl! whee
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fastclickchic · Community Member · Thu Aug 31, 2006 @ 08:38pm
domokundomokundomokundomokundomokundomokun domokuns for good luck~!
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Shrimp Dumplings · Community Member · Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 05:34am
How did you make it look so professional??? im starting a manga and i dont know how to make it look like that
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Kyanii · Community Member · Fri Sep 01, 2006 @ 09:45pm
aww. its ok hunT.T dont EVER feel sad about it. its coolXD heartheartheart
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 12:38am
Squeee. *is excited* But ignore me, and take your time. 3nodding
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 05:32pm
MrNailVT · Community Member · Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 05:08am
(* *) *sniffles* It's beautiful...
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DLX3 · Community Member · Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 05:34am
HI BELLADONA you are so good a drawing biggrin I am serious stare I wish I could draw like you but I cant cryingsweatdropcry I know it takes practice but I"m still not getting any better mad so I will just keep trying.I love your comic It is so good razz Well thats my comment to you!!! domokunheartdomokunheartblaughblaughblaugh
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anjbabygirl · Community Member · Sun Sep 03, 2006 @ 03:58pm
Hi belladona!!! heart Your drawings ae SO good!!! heart Will you please draw me next time you see me?? It"s ally by the way. dramallama YOU''RE... crying SO crying ...GOOD... cryingdomokun *starts hyperventilating* I know i spelled that wrong domokun
I love the page and can't wait to find out what happens next and how the whole operation goes down.
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Julina Lynch · Community Member · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 11:51am
lol i like josh's face keep it up xd
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Akuma_ Higurashi · Community Member · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 05:35pm
awsome!! Grape sodas my friend XD *ties up and flings over yeti" Off to get JOSH* rides towards him* *Josh* "Yeah, such a nice..WHAT THE HELL." *murasaki* "JOSH <333 " *josh takes off running, but murasaki throws tied up Grape Soda at him* Murasaki* "YAY!!" *glomps him* xdxdxd
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 08:58pm
You're gonna LOVE what's comming up next Demon! xd It will be hillarious!
i like the creepy expression and how josh is all like "uh duh! am i being followededed? dur dur dur" hahah... ^_^
keep it up!!! hey hey hey what does crispy do? does he pretend to be hurt then we all pounce him or something?
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MrNailVT · Community Member · Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 12:10am
Josh is a babe. heart He makes me smile.
And I love my mad ninja skills, for ninjas rule all. xd I love my avatar's expression in the fourth pannel. >_> Oh yeah.
My sister is reading this over my shoulder and is like: She's a good drawer. I'm all: No- bloody amazing is more like it. xp
I can't wait for the next page, since it's one of the only reasons I come on Gaia (and I like Gwee the Dragon- which is a reason all its own). Take your time however, blurry eyes are no fun (I would know). 3nodding
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snowtiger6776 · Community Member · Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 02:01am
it's snow tiger's turn! w00t! can't wait to see what happens next! ninja and lol to demon up there heart XD ^^
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Grape Sodapop · Community Member · Wed Sep 06, 2006 @ 09:10pm
Hehehe.. I like this page, especially Demon's pannel. Also, Josh's face is priceless. I know he's my bud, but I have to agree with SnowTiger, he's a babe! LMAO.
Man, since the beginning of chapter 2 your drawings have really stayed consistant. I think you're really setting up a style now Bella. Great job as always and I can't wait to see what they do in "Operation Crispy"! xdrofl
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Josh_JB_Benton · Community Member · Thu Sep 07, 2006 @ 04:43pm
:'D I love Josh's expression. And the tree. Mm...tree... xD;; Really, though, the tree looks cool.
whee I can't wait to see what happens! <3
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g o u tango · Community Member · Thu Sep 07, 2006 @ 05:08pm
LOL! This is great! The chatter on the comlink gives a great sense of mood and helps the reader really get into the moment.
You did really well on the flow between each frame. I get the feeling that I am there, following the characters' movements.
Also, the external and internal texts are great! I like how well his expression melds with his inner though of being followed. Very nice touch with changing the bubble format for the text coming out of the walky-talky.
Nicco Nightstar · Community Member · Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 12:02pm
It looks great. Very nicely done. *thumbs up*
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Kalin DNom · Community Member · Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 01:36pm
AH! There's no more there's no more! AIEEEEEEE! *runs in circles*
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Lysine · Community Member · Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 06:23pm
AWSOME! Looks go good, Bell-Bell!
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KarabeanSweet · Community Member · Sat Sep 09, 2006 @ 10:48pm
Wow, your manga is awesome! Really great artwork!
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anime_sora · Community Member · Sun Sep 10, 2006 @ 04:57am
I cant wait *.* ninja4laughheartheartheartheartheartheartheart *sneaks around*
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Yuna de la lune · Community Member · Tue Sep 12, 2006 @ 08:18am
After many conversations and odd mishaps, the hunt is on!
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Hana Maehata · Community Member · Wed Sep 13, 2006 @ 06:07am
Oh, I so didn't know this page was up! o.o!!! Bad gay-man. xd I love Josh's expression in this page. He's somewhere between pregocnitive and clueless. It's so cute! whee
In any case, no complaints. I really like how the tree trunk came out. xd Poor Josh.
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Sagando Mirasta · Community Member · Wed Sep 13, 2006 @ 05:13pm
this manga is really cool! I love it whee
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Aeshin · Community Member · Wed Sep 13, 2006 @ 07:10pm
wow. impressive. Belladona, have you ever tried using screen tone? omg, that would be make it even more great. i have one, yet, i dont know how to put it on the paper. i have a how to draw manga book, ( i know how to draw) and there's supplies on what you need for manga....... want the list? 4laugh4laugh4laugh
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Asuka Red · Community Member · Sat Sep 16, 2006 @ 01:42am
hey you!!! I love your work...its amazing and can't wait to see more.. biggrin
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SweetSteffy · Community Member · Mon Jan 08, 2007 @ 04:30am