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Monstrous Atrocity
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A Story.
Once upon a ******** time,
I had your trust,
And you had mine.
But lie after lie,
It came undone.
Sooner than we'd seen it,
A monster I'd become.

Between tainted lands,
And blackened, bloody,
Reddened hands,
Curl after curl of love unfurled.
Before our very eyes,
We parted with the world.

"I love you" can't be said.
And with it all figured out,
I'll just lie around in bed.
Mother, feline, book and friend,
All for not when you reach...

The End.






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Papa Beane
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comment Commented on: Wed Jan 17, 2007 @ 02:13am
Very nice. I really like this one, it has a rhythm at least to me it does. For some reason I realy like the last three lines, well two if you dont count 'The End'
I givith thee two thumbs up.

Also bitching avi.

dramallama Ahahahahahaha!


comment Commented on: Sun Oct 14, 2007 @ 09:38am
i like gonk



msfelonieone
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