This is about one-third, maybe less, of my first Naruto FanFic. Tell me what you guys think of it, and I'll try to upload the rest at a later date. Maybe once it's all up, you guys can help me think of a good name for it.
This is my first fanfiction, be gentle razz
I do not own Naruto or any of it's characters, if I did, I would be rich.
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It was a fine-looking morning in Konohagakure, the Village Hidden in the Leaves, and Uzumaki Naruto was bored. “Aaaaaaaargh! This is BORING! I mean, we’ve been here for three hours, and NOTHING IS HAPPENING! Will someone please tell me why we’re here?!?!” An x-shaped vein was pulsating on his forehead. His teacher, Hatake Kakashi, turned to face him and said, “For the fifth time, Naruto, we’re investigating a rumor that there will be an assassination attempt against Lord Hokage tonight. We’re going to stay here, quietly, and make sure that Lord Hokage stays safe.” His voice was soft and calm, yet with a subtle strength, like a swift river.
But you could feel a sense of annoyance in his voice. “Naruto, Shut up!” whispered Haruno Sakura. Unbeknownst to her, Naruto had been harboring a big secret crush on her. He started to blush, his cheeks turning reddish-pink. “What? Hey, that was mean, Sakura!” grumbled the orange jump-suited ninja. “Will all of you please shut up?! I don’t know if you guys forgot, but, WE’RE ON A MISSION!” hissed Uchiha Sasuke, the third member of Naruto’s team. “Now, let’s focus our attention back to watching over Lord Hokage, if none of you have any objections.” He was starting to feel a little bit annoyed with his teammates.
They stayed awake the entire night, but nothing happened to the Hokage, aside from some scattered tossing and turning brought on by random memories and personal dreams. When 5 o’clock rolled around, they heard a faint sound. It was very high-pitched. “It’s those ninja from that Sound Village!” gasped Naruto, after a few moments of straining to hear the sound. Kakashi listened intently for a few more moments, and then vanished in a few puffs of smoke and dust. “He must have found the location that the sound was coming from.” Mused Sakura, her turquoise eyes flashing in thought. “Sakura, you just can’t stay quiet, can you?” growled Sasuke, his frustration growing with each additional annoyance.
Then, they heard a muffled giggle coming from behind them. They turned around and saw……a small brown-haired boy with a towel tied around his neck like a cape. “Hey, Boss!” said the kid. “Konohamaru, what are you doing here?!" yelled Naruto after his heartbeat dropped back to within his normal range. “I live here, too, ya know! The Hokage is my Grandpa, remember?” exclaimed Konohamaru. “Oh, yeah! Heh heh! Sorry, I forgot about that!” remarked the blonde-headed boy, scratching the back of his head with his right hand. “I couldn’t sleep, so I walked around for a while, trying to make myself tired. I heard you guys talking, so I thought I’d sneak up on you and surprise you! I even whistled softly, and you know how good a whistler I am!” said the brown-haired boy. “That was you?! Kakashi-sensei just went to track down the source!” yelled Sakura. “Really? He must not be a good Jounin if he couldn’t even find a whistler sitting right behind him!” exclaimed Konohamaru.
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