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bardock75's Brain Blasts!!! These will just be some stuff I think up. Just some random stuff, and maybe a Naruto fanfic I've been working on.....


bardock75
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Part three:
Here's part three:

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The original Naruto showed up at the same time as the 5 replica ninjas. They were all about to close in and perform the Naruto Rendan, when Konohamaru clasped his hands together and shouted, “Oiroke no Jutsu!” Instantly, he was shrouded in a plume of dust and smoke. When the cloud dissipated, there was a very…………..beautiful scantily-clad brunette girl in his place. All the Naruto clones felt their faces turn scarlet. Then, all of the Shadow Clones went POOF, leaving the original, who laughed and said, “Nice counter, kid! I see you’ve been practicing that, too! Nice work!” The girl went POOF, and Konohamaru reappeared, in all his hyperactive, towel-wrapped glory. “Thanks, Boss! You put up a good fight, too!” “Thanks, Konohamaru!” said the yellow-headed ninja.

Meanwhile, back at the Hokage’s mansion, the other members of Naruto’s squad were stifling a group yawn. They completely failed this. A huge “RRRRRRRROOAAAAWWWWWWW!” erupted from the three of them. “We’ve got to be quieter when we yawn!” gasped Sakura, her bright pink hair shimmering in the early morning light. Once the three ninjas had their breathing back under control, they turned back to watching the Hokage, who appeared to still be fast asleep.
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This is all that I've written so far. I'm working on it a few times every week at school, in a spiral notebook. Please tell me what you think if it so far, in a journal comment!





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[riku_kazama]
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comment Commented on: Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 04:49pm
not bad im probly am going to write stories about my rp character named riku XD
First comment! Woot XD *does the first comment dance*


comment Commented on: Wed Feb 28, 2007 @ 11:21pm
WHAT THE HECK!!!!! STUPID gaia! I typed in this (admittedly long) message, and then it tells me there's a *start using high-pitched mimick-y voice here* "2000 character limit to messages". razz Jerkfaces. So yeah. Will be broken up into multiple parts. *glares hatefully at gaia*

Haha, very nice! Can't wait to see what happens next! I love Konohomaru- he's so sweet! It'd be really nice if you'd un-westernize the names, though. : ) (i.e. Uzumaki Naruto, Uchiha Sasuke, Hatake Kakashi, etc.) It's cute, though, and I can't wait to read more. In fact, the only thing I didn't like was the teeny tiny little fact that.... SASUKE ONLY HAD TWO LINES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What's up with THAT!?!?!?!?!??!?!!? : ) Hehe. Sorry. Couldn't help it. : ) (Oh, BTW, this is Wendi. Just realized I hadn't said so yet. Though you could probably tell by my freaky Sasuke-obsessed-ness. lol).



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Reyvataeil
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comment Commented on: Thu Mar 08, 2007 @ 10:04pm
That was good! I like it so far...can't wait to read what will happen next! Very cute, yes 4laugh . Oh yeah...and with Sasuke? More lines for him, please mad D!


comment Commented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 10:41pm
*villagers wake up and start yelling because Team 7 yawned too loudly* Hey! Keep it down! Some of us actually sleep, ya know!
*I laugh in the background* lol I hope Team Kakashi didn't actually yawn that loud... Otherwise they might have been the reason that Sarutobi woke up!



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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 11:39pm
I like that!!! That was very good in my opinion!!! 3nodding Keep writting!!!


comment Commented on: Wed Sep 12, 2007 @ 12:19am
cool!



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FsngnShiekFan
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comment Commented on: Sun Sep 16, 2007 @ 09:29pm
pretty good! wink


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