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Firtahls Songbook
I write all my songs in here. Comment on some of them!! I'm always looking for constructive criticism. I'll have the Band/Song that influenced the song under the Title
Hold your breath
Take a step
Out into the nothingness
The nothing you knew so well
Take my hand and look into my eyes
You know it's true

I can see into you
Further and further
as you realize
What I've come to do
I've come for you

Hold your breath
Take a step
Hold my hand
Don't let go

This space is unwritten as of yet, I'm working with my guitarist (little help that he is) to try and finish it, but we have the outro...

Falling
Falling down
I can't hold on
Don't let go
Can't hold on
Stay strong
Keep strong
Don't let go/Can't hold on

The last verse is sung by a female vocal and a male vocal, and the last line is at the same time. I wanted to convey the girl the song is being sung to, and the person singing it





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