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DanteDiLuca Report | 08/14/2009 10:56 pm

Lol. Thank you for the constructive critisism on my work. Realize that it is only a rather small portion of the book. lol, I've written alot more than that. But I have yet to copyright it, so I am not willing to show much more than what I've given up.

As for the terminology, the "wings of an angel" part I was thinking of droping yet. XD you just confirmed it.