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Mythical Detective V -chapter four-
Chapter Four

-The Wolf-Dog-




Fric, with his red hoodie on, looked at the time on his watch. "Where the hell is V?" he asked, shoving both hands in his pocket. It was freezing, as he exhaled he could see his breath.

After ten minutes, a black car pulled up, Fric watched the window roll down, and black cat poked its head out and moved. V soon stuck her head out, "Get in."
Fric nodded and moved around the car and opened the passenger door. As soon as he sat down, he shut the door of the car.
"You read all of the report and the profiles?"
"Eh...All of the report, two outta three profiles..."
"Your loss."
she said and sighed.

It remained silent in car until they reached the destination.

The car car stopped in front of a black church, The church of Satan.
The cat remained in the car as the two others left. V opened the trunk of the car, pulling out two suitcases. When she shut the trunk she laid the suit cases on top of the car, opening both. V pulled out a revolver, and loaded it with gold bullets, of course in side the bullets was holy water. She switched the gun to safety and placed the gun in a holster around her waist. She loaded another gun with the bullets and held it out for Fric. Fric grabbed the gun and did the same. In a ouch on her waist she placed more bullets. She shut the suit cases and walked toward the house. "Follow me, Stay quiet and shoot only when I say." she said, entering the black church.

Fric shivered, it was colder in here then it was outside, and the walls held pictures of Satan, up-side down crosses. From what it appeared, there was even blood.

V led Fric down the hallway, soon enough, she was at the corner again, like she was. She heard the voices of Gluttony and Wrath right around the corner. Fric listened in, he took a deep breath, soon enough V want around the corner.

Gluttony's maniacal grin appeared on his face, "Oh lady, your back, I see you brought a friend this time, You don't want my Momma mad like last time, you had better give me candy."
V stared at him, and pointed her gun straight at him, and shot. Like last time Gluttony dissolved away.
A terrifying screech filled the room, Wrath was angered.
Fric terrified as the woman charged at V, grabbing her neck in the air. Why wasn't V panicking? He shot at her, but the bullets did nothing. V yelled, "I said shoot when I tell you too!" Fric yelled back, "Your going to be killed!"
V could barely breath, soon a loud growl filled the room.
Fric turned to see a wolf-dog like animal. It was tan skinned though and it short fur, but, like a Zebra's back, was long brown fur along it's back, the fur also made it's tail. It had a black headband on. It remained to growl, it white fangs showing.







User Comments: [5]
Jin The Slayer
Community Member





Sun May 20, 2007 @ 07:55am


:3
Good good.
Caaaaat, I always admire your writing, especially that book about the White and Black slayers.
x3


Nu Dragoste Pisici
Community Member





Sun May 20, 2007 @ 08:16pm


Ah, nice.


Shinymon
Community Member





Tue May 22, 2007 @ 12:16am


I would've finished that one too, but like I lost the site and username and password to the thing thing XD

I think it sucks :/ but whatever you guys think.


Nu Dragoste Pisici
Community Member





Tue May 22, 2007 @ 12:43am


I forgot the site too, I bookmarked it, but my hard-drive took a wipe.

I just took a look for it: FOUND IT!
http://chochan-cat.livejournal.com/

Your story is good, granted, this chapter wasn't my fave and didn't engross me as well, but, you CAN write well.


EveeA7X
Community Member





Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 02:07am


i really like this story!!! hmm....i wonder what the wolf guy is going to do!


User Comments: [5]
 
 
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