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Otherworld: The Begining (Introduction)
Imbedded in pain, past the malcontent and mistrust lay a story...

I almost blame it all on my lust to be a hero. I wanted attention and respect. From early on it was blatantly obvious that I would never great. I wrote stories about heroes, champions of good who conquered the darkness. The hero never lost and never faltered. He was a picture of perfection.

Something has happened. I have been…moved to another world. This world is new, but then again it is all familiar. I see the road ahead of me. It’s twisted and dark, and along the path’s edges lay many a danger. If I venture to far in any direction many could suffer. I reflect on my picture of a hero. I see the road ahead of me; I see and realize that I know nothing of heroes.


This is the introduction to my first book. Tell me what you think. (The first paragraph IS part of the story stressed ) Enjoy and let me hear your thoughts.






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Lunarius Maji
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 08, 2005 @ 06:07pm
Its a good start! I like a writer who tells the story as if he's speeking to someone! Keep going!


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 19, 2005 @ 09:27pm
love it...cant wait to read the rest... smile



RavenofHaden
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Dark Rayn
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commentCommented on: Mon May 09, 2005 @ 04:36pm
I read all that and thought, "Dang, that's it? Keep going, this sounds very interesting!" Well, sounds like a pretty cool book. Keep at it! biggrin


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