anything after the purple kinda depends on if you like it. 3nodding if you don't, let me know and i'll try to re write it.
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Arwen stood at his feet, "I'll pay him back for not telling me what he did," she said looking at Elzia. She turned to the unhappy dark Grimor staring up at her, "You will be returned to whence you came."
"No..." he yelled as the Darkling clamped his mouth shut almost breaking his jaw. Arwen began to cast a spell as he began to glow softly and then a shot of light flew from where he laid and he was gone
"where did you send him arwen?" she asked feeling she already knew the answer to it.
"i sent him back to grimor," she said almost emotionless.
illidan turned to arwen now with a deadly look, and quickly moved to her pinning her to the ground. "why did you tell us about him?" he said in a deep growl.
Elzia was shocked at the turn of emotion in illidan. she had never seen him lose his temper in the several years that they had been together, and was now frightened. she ran as fast as she could forgetting to watch for traps. she steped on a trigger and was immediatly wooshed (change that please?) into the air in a cage.
"we didn't think you needed to know," she said in a calm tone. "he thought he had sent him some where where no one could find him. we didn't think anyone would be able to find him, let alone him."
"him?" he said. "who's him?"
"ILLIDAN!" elzia screamed when she finally realized where she was. she heard the shadow's cackle, and her eyes darted around to find them. she found herself being taken to the castle in the distance, and curled into a ball in fear.
"elzia?" he said as he looked around. "ELZIA!" he began to run after her, but was held back by arwen's wind.
"you can't go after her," arwen said still in a calm tone. "it's what they want you to do."
"don't tell me what to do!" he growled as he rounded on her.
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i'll stop here until you get back. so i don't get to carried away, and have to rewrite it all. i want you HONEST oppinion. if you don't like it, i'll re write it.
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