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today we were learning about telling and showing writing. telling writing is a sentence like this: Yesterday we won our baseball game. showing writing is like this: our vigorous game was about to be lost. i started to pack up my bat bag when suddenly, CRACK! anthony hit a 3 run homer and won the our championship game. anthony is now or hero for that.:: that didnt really happen thats just a story now i want all of u reading my journal to turn this telling sentence into a showing paragraph (its good for ur brain blaugh blaugh blaugh )

the last day of school was the best



if u r a christian post this in ur siggy if ur not afraid about it
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    GoTh_eM0_prince
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    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 02:28pm
    so u r a chatolic


    commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 05:51am
    no im not im christian


    if u r a christian post this in ur siggy if ur not afraid about it
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    Hikari Tsukiko Yami
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    commentCommented on: Wed Jun 13, 2007 @ 05:52am
    sweet


    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 22, 2007 @ 04:29pm
    you talk too much about skool!!! and learning!!!!



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