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Hiya ppl! I'm Marluxia Oblivion! The crazy, and insane manga artist/fan is here on Gaia Online and my journal is nothing normal. LOL!=p Anyway, my journal is going to be filled with short stories and manga stories I write/wrote about. So, enjoy! MEOW
BLOOD RAYNE!: WHATS IN THE BOX?!?!?!?!?
So.......far in blood rayne.............
Chapter 1: If the lock opens.....
" Hi there!!!!!!!"
Alice screamed."AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!" In the box, was a small doll with a spider on it's head, tickling it. " What's your name?" the doll asked. Alice was trembling. " A-A-Alice Grave," she replied. The doll got out of the box. " My name is........uh........," she hesitated." I don't have a name. Funny.huh?" Alice looked at the doll. The same hair as her, the same outfit as her. " What are you?" Alice asked. The doll looked at her and blinked. " I dunno." The dolls eyes lit up. " Thank you for getting me out of that box," she said." If you helped me, then, you can name me!" Alice sat there thinking. She looked at the box. " How about....Lock," she said. The doll jumped up and down in joy." YAY! My name is Lock!" she said. the spider ran behind Lock. " Oh! This is Crawler, my pet fuzzy spider," Lock said. Alice stared at them. The growling noise came back. Lock smiled." I'm hungry!" she said running around in circles around Alice. Alice looked at her. " Uh...what do you eat then?" she asked. Lock stopped. " Bread and cheese," she replied. " And Crawler eats gelatin with chopped up flies in it." Alice went to the kitchen and got their food. Lock sat there feeding Crawler his gelatin, while she ate her bread and cheese. Alice stared at them. "Uh....do you know who you belong to?" she asked. Lock stared as she pulled a piece of bread from her mouth. " I belong to you," she replied, taking another bite out of the bread. Crawler sat there as Lock gave him a spoonful of gelatin. Lock looked at Alice. " Alice, have you heard of Eden Demonica before?" she asked. Alice stared at her. " Eden Demonica?" she asked." No. I haven't." Lock looked at Crawler."Oh. Okay," she said. Alice picked up Lock." Is that where you're from, Lock?" she asked.
SCARY!!!!!!!! the new character.....LOCK!!!!! Bios on Alice Grave, Nadia and Tyran Highwind and Lock+Crawler coming soon............






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 02:07am
Great story so far! I like the way you show the suspense and drama! And the part with the doll surprised me! Tell me when you add more! XD


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