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The Eight, Powers of The Angels
A powerful story regarding the destinies of several humans thrust with the task of saving the universe, with a twist. [Updates delayed]
Chapter 7: The Power within
James slowly stood up. The icy water didn’t move. “How is this even possible?” He asked no one.

“It’s because you are special and only special things happen to special people,” James spun around.

There was a woman behind him. Her hair was short and like a raven’s; thin, jet black and even. The woman’s eyes were a sort of purple and her skin was as pale as the snow around them. An elegant silver cloak that swept the snowy earth covered her shoulders and whole body while making her gleam star bright.

“Come with me James,” She laughed a bright tinkling laugh. “Come and leave this town where you and your talents are underappreciated.”

James watched with horror as his foot took one step forward on its own. “What are you?” He breathed.

“Walk a bit faster and you will know. I do know all about you James. That bit of water behind you is nothing compared to what I can teach you.” The woman smiled and flashed her blazingly whit teeth. “I know you want to learn. I’ve seen your thoughts and I also see the ambition that lies within you. Come with me and watch that power in you grow.”

Ever since the woman first spoke , James felt something cold inside him stir. With every word she had spoken he could feel this thing inside him awaken more and more. It tore at his being and soul. It lashed out and wanted freedom. He couldn’t help but think that maybe this lady could help him. Make him whole again.
His other foot slowly moved closer.

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  • User Comments: [9]
    White_Tears
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    Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 04:11am


    I want more damnit!!!
    Can you try and write more!!!????
    please~

    EDIT:
    White*

    Woooow!!! less grammer errors that i noticed
    AWESOME!!~~
    keep on writing more


    Travelgirl2009
    Community Member





    Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 01:01pm


    ditto just about everything White said.


    Erebus Haze
    Community Member





    Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 01:47pm


    I did the last 3 in Microfsoft word so I could do 'em offline and just copy and paste. are there still errors? There aren't supposed to be.... stare sweatdrop


    Travelgirl2009
    Community Member





    Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 01:58pm


    only one my computer saw was under appreciated. it's 2 words, not 1.


    mayday22
    Community Member





    Mon Jun 25, 2007 @ 05:05pm


    Ooooo.
    Good. Very good.


    Erebus Haze
    Community Member





    Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 03:26am


    Battle Scene coming soon! mrgreen Mark your calendars a month in advace, just to be sure. I don' know when I'll actually sit down and have the inspiration to make it though. sweatdrop


    Travelgirl2009
    Community Member





    Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 01:06am


    OMG! xd seriously?!? A battle?!? YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xd will some1 die? make some1 die.


    Erebus Haze
    Community Member





    Thu Jul 05, 2007 @ 02:31pm


    ............What's with you and dying? confused


    Travelgirl2009
    Community Member





    Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 02:35am


    very complicated. u'd have to pm me if u really wanna find out.


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