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The War Of The Legions
Book 1:The New Evil
Commander Tarp was worried as Xaldin stopped his army from attacking,and slowly walks toward Tarp.Xaldin draws his sword and points it at Tarp's head."Surrender now,and you shall live,"he says.Then silence floated in the room for awhile.Then he says,"Then die you will."He lifts his sword and quickly strikes down.*CLASH*Tarp falls back in shock.The mysterious man wearing all black clashed swords with Xaldin."I thought you might need the help,"says the man.Xaldin and the man pull back their swords ad start to battle.*CLASH**CLASH**POW*The man kicks Xaldin to the ground.Xaldin is laying in shock.
"Leave at once!Retreat!"yells Xaldin.The all retreat and the ship floats away.Everyone starts cheering knowing that they won this round.Tarp calls the man back to the office.They both sit down.Silence filled the room.Then finally the man said,"I was only trying to help because I wanted to get back at him."Tarp says,"What are you talking about?I brought you here to congratulate you and ask you to join us.Are you in?"The man waits abit and then answers,"Sure,but have you ever heard about the story of how this began?""Yeah."says Tarp.The man leans over the desk and says,"Well you may not believe me,but I'm Zoron."Tarp stares at him,then says ,"Yeah right.Zoron is dead.Didn't you hear,It says that he fell off the ship about 30 feet down into the water.NOBODY could have survived that!"Then the man takes off the black cape and black coat and says,"Well I lived it."Tarp jumps up out of his chair and stands for 30 seconds while looking at the scars on the mans body.Then faints in shock shortly after.


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  • User Comments: [1]
    Mariya08
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    Fri Feb 22, 2008 @ 04:52pm


    I ment to have commented on this ages ago. At the end where Tarp faints site-not-allowed hahaha.
    I like it for a 60 second wounder xd


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