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my thoughts and poems
well. sometimes i'll write thoughts or i'll write poems. give me your opinion on my poems
my new poem!
MY OPPOSITES

the opposite of courage to be gained
is the fear of losing it all,
When the opposite of a rising kingdom
is a palace thats ready to fall.

The opposite of a broken heart
is the beautiful love created by two,
and the opposite of of those strong and brave
are the ones that are fearful of you.

The opposite of a polluted mind
is the clean mind of an innocent child,
and the opposite of a longing frown
is the smile that makes it all worth while.

Opposites create balance
And show those that are weak and strong,
these opposites create the difference in us
and it is why we've lasted so long.

my newly written poem






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AceFreako
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 14, 2007 @ 05:06am
wow, thats really good.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 01, 2007 @ 03:32am
that is realy good



mobydick98887
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Vinnycent
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 10:43pm
that's really good. (sorry for copying the people above me. lol.) but seriously, it's good. And I have another pair of opposites. Energtic, exciting, funny, and full of life. Dull, boring, not funny, full of boredome. In other words, me on my computer or me ion real life. lol.


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