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Stuff inside me
things i think feel, wonder, and maybe even poetry^^
Never Let Go
Never let go

Whisper in my ear,
the things i want to hear
but only if you feel it.
Hold me tightly,
kiss me lightly,
and never let go.
You can can tell me what you feel,
but only if its real,
don't tell me because its what i want to hear.
Dont tell me its ok,
unless you can make things that way
and take my sorrow from me.
Wrap your arms around me
seeing only what we want to see
and never let go.






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Aylin774
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commentCommented on: Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 10:42pm
That was beautiful poem heart heart


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 05:15pm
Its well put together.
The first 7 lines are perfect
The eighth could be changed
Dont tell what I want to hear is better, becasue lines to long
rest is perfect.
I like it alot



HinajiHyuuga
Community Member
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