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The Perfect Date-7 ((Still Working))
She had been watching her left hand shaking for the last 15 minutes...it was scary to know how afraid she was of males, especially ones she never saw before. Jumping out of the car and looking around, she saw every guy stare at her or her sister, all the girls where jealous. Then jumping a little as Ananom placed his hand upon her side, she just let it be for she didn't want to turn out looking like and idiot in front of everyone, maybe he didn't want to either.

Looking at him she saw he was putting on a fake smile, he was acting. Her heart and body relaxed at this discovery, he didn't want to be with her or she with him. Acting along she leaned on his arm and looked at him, giving him a secret wink, realising himself that she was also acting, they proceeded towards the entrance with smiles as they where accompanied by her sister and Mordior.

Looking at the selection of movies, Mordior suddenly yelled out.

"Lets see X-Men II!" he concluded, making Enigma and Sepia jump. With a faint smile Sepia agree for the rest and they entered the cinemas.

X-Men...he seems to have great taste...she thought while her cheeks went pink a bit. Realising what she was doing she discarded her thoughts and just grabbed the Fanta from Ananom's hands and walked inside the dark room, sitting down in the far corner to the left, right at the back.

She and her sister had always loved watching movies, they saw every movie that came out together...alone. But this was a bit different...it was like this time there was a gap between them, she felt separated. Ananom came to sit next to her, as Mordior and Sepia sat in front of them. Moving away from each other without any comment, they just payed attention to the movie and let the other be in peace.

The movie started and she felt sick, she couldn't concentrate, her sister and him where right in her face...it was disturbing. Looking around she noticed only two more people but she couldn't figure out weather it were males or females. Turning back to the movie she saw the unbelievable, the joining of two parts...the first sign of love and affection...a kiss.

No...she thought in her head, as the image kept on rewind and repeating itself. She felt love and hate at the same time, for the opposite reason her sister was feeling...it was something she never thought existed. While she felt sad and happy her sister felt happy and sad...they had different feelings for the same things. The suddenly she felt a stab of pain within her heart, it was like knifes and knifes where being aimed at it With a blurry vision the last she saw was Ananom's body on the floor, Sepia and Mordior out of sight.

Her vision turned to darkness as she felt another two hot pains on her back and her whole body turning almost to ice, she could only hear a small scream from afar but she saw nothing more...just darkness.






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FoxmanZEO
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commentCommented on: Sun May 01, 2005 @ 12:48pm
Also cool, great place to leave us in suspence!
I wish I had tried A little harder in my Journal story thing, (It sucked so I deleted it sweatdrop )


commentCommented on: Sun May 01, 2005 @ 01:41pm
Alright! This is good, you got the feeling of suspence as our friend above has said. This keeps your story intrsting to the reader. good transition also. So far, your eating me in this. lol, Keep it up.



Grey_Kitsune
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Orlia
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commentCommented on: Sun May 01, 2005 @ 11:08pm
Thanks so much guys, you really are a great inspiration to me! 3nodding


commentCommented on: Mon May 02, 2005 @ 03:51am
i liked it suspense, darkness, even the ocasional internal conflict, what the hell am i saying, WHEEEEEE! *runs around in circles for no apparent reason*



Harusen
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Orlia
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commentCommented on: Mon May 02, 2005 @ 04:03am
Hahahaha...lol. Funny! Thank You!

*Chases him...trying to give hug*


commentCommented on: Tue May 03, 2005 @ 06:01pm
This story is so good!!!! blaugh

Its very detailed and I would be more then happy to draw for you!!!
Ooooo I cant wait! * Jumps with joy* <3 anywho This is all so weird! I rele like this site though! heart Ehehehe ^_^ Anywho Talk to you later I guess!!!



kauri_Tsuo
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