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lifes depressions

depression, sadness, self pity
these are my greatest enemys
these emotions that burden me so.
how i wish we could live life without these obsticals
because i fight these tireless emotions from day to day
they try to pull me down, suffacate me
somtimes they succed but there strenghth is nothing
nothing at all comared to the strength of the Lord
at the very sound of his name these burdens on my heart lift for he is king!
so i say that i not go through life with these depressions on my heart, drowning from my self pity but to live in the light!

this is a poem i wrote yesterday
i hope you like it smile
pm me if you want to talk about it

we are drawn to each other
like drops of water,like the planets
we repulse each other
like magnets,like the colors of our skin
-bleach volume 4

Posted by: komodochristian Thu Jul 19, 2007 @ 01:16am

we are drawn to each other
like drops of water,like the planets
we repulse each other
like magnets,like the colors of our skin
-bleach volume 4

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GRANDPOPS
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Commented on: Thu Jul 19, 2007 @ 08:29pm


	stare

Commented on: Fri Jul 20, 2007 @ 11:12am


	It's all about willpower.. if you believe that these will drag you down then they will. Your mood can be easily determined by choice.. choose happiness. biggrin

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Commented on: Mon Jul 23, 2007 @ 02:43pm


	im in shock in a good way eek

Commented on: Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 03:36am


	Nice ^.^

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Commented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 11:29pm


	You should post in your journal more.

Commented on: Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 09:57pm


	Even thought I'm *not* christian, I think this is very well written.

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Commented on: Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 09:20pm


	o.o I like it, tho...i kinda agree with JiMmY_octavarium.. It's good ^.^

Commented on: Sat Aug 18, 2007 @ 08:43am


	hehe ur poems are really good u should be a famous poet , i would deffinently show up for ur speaches and contests. dont let anyone tell u differently , ur a geart person. keep wrighting more poems.

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JesusGirl816
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Commented on: Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 05:53am


	Ur a really good writer. I luv to write. I'm glad u write. You should write stuff more often in ur journal. Great job. You are a wonderful author!! ~Sierra

Commented on: Thu Aug 30, 2007 @ 01:54am


	i luv this poem its so nice..^^ u should write more often

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Commented on: Thu Aug 30, 2007 @ 01:55am


	^^

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