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Random Thingies That Trot Through My Brain....
All sort of thing........
Intro:
It was midnight. A young boy lay in his bed not aware of what was going to happen to him on this night. Something was comeing for him. This "thing" would turn his would upside-down, and trasform him into something of his nightmares.


Running Free
By: [Valentina]
Piece 1/? of chapt. 1


The night sky was clear. the stars and moon shone brightly over the forest just past the old picket fence at the Badru Ranch. This night seemed peaceful enough, but there was something about it's erie silence. Not a sound was made through out the forest, besides the occasional snap of a twig or russtle of leaves. There was something move through the forest. A creature of childrens' nightmares, and this creature was on a mission. A mission that lay awake in his bed.



Okay here the first little chunk of chapter one. comment an tell me what you think.
~Valentina N. Badru






User Comments: [1]
truth_is_told
Community Member





Thu Aug 21, 2008 @ 06:41pm


Quote:
This "thing" would turn his {Would} upside-down...

Don't you mean world? xp
Sounds fine besides that but...ah... Wait...
Quote:
There was something [that moved] through the forest.

Ok that sounds better. But where's the rest of the story?


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