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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
random poem
" Punnishment of a sinning Alchemist"


As darkness turns to light,
no one knows what i've become,
inside.
no one knows, because it's a secret.
a secret from you,
and a secret from me,
don't let me know.

as darkness turns to light,
i'm changing.
the elements are punishing me,
for what i have done.
forgive me lease!
I don't know what to do!
this is a punnishment for my crimes,
but these wounds arn't healing,
they are tearing open at the sight,
i'm sorry for what I did.
help me!
-sakuka


this would make a lot more sence if you watched Full metal alchemist. which I do recomend. Ed is rembering his past and his mother and how it's his fault that Al dosn't have a body. he is remembering that the memory of what he did is his punnishment. that human transmutetation ...well you get thepoint...and if you don't...start watching FMA!. and yess I did use a phrase out of a song...'As Darkness turns to Light' I did not make up that part!!! the rest is orignal! ^.^






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 19, 2007 @ 05:25am
oh i like this one too! I can totally see this as being what Ed would think, too. I think my favorite line is where the wounds "they are tearing open at the sight". It comes together nicely at the end, too, where he says he needs help. I also like how you start out with the song lyric and then go off from there. XD


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