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Its Another Poem *gasp*
We are all just fishes in the sea
But I think your the fish made just for me
To swim togeather for the rest of time
Even if this next line doesnt rhyme

Cause like birds of a feather
I want us to be togeather
I don't care what the others say
We will find a way

Lets just spend the night
Let the world become right
We can just go ahead
Lets lead the world instead

Because we are hanging by this simple moment
Not knowing what it really meant
The true meaning left with in it
A mystery left brightly lit

Lets just let the world disappear
I don't care if the sun is near
I want to stay like this with you forever...
Never leaving your loving arms ever


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Nekko-master
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 07, 2007 @ 07:03am
I really like this Poem.
It's very nice and I like it alot.
Rated Ten out of Ten.
Good Job Lanna. blaugh


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 07, 2007 @ 06:53pm
Do you make these up? These are great! 10/10



master zinn
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s a v i e_x
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 07, 2007 @ 08:48pm
Nice poem. heart


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 12:15am
i like it 10/10



minigamerchick
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contamar-the-deamon-blade
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 06:36am
whimsical, and very nice but nothing is ever perfect, and always room to improve, so im sorry, 9/10


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