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Can you see the Light?
Poetry
Small moments of being together, Small hopes of need to the touch
of the one you love. The moments where everything is alright, when you can hold onto them.
Hold onto the one you love.






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H E L L S I N G
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commentCommented on: Thu May 19, 2005 @ 07:32pm
I try my hardest to do this...and I hope it is enough, but I shall continue to strive.


commentCommented on: Fri May 20, 2005 @ 03:41am
Now for the constructive review. ^_^ No worries.
A person with some experience in poetry can grasp it, but it does need work to open a picture for people.

A broken phrase style is great. I love it. ^_^ heart



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Takeru_Crimson
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commentCommented on: Fri May 20, 2005 @ 11:04pm
Quite frankly, I love it! 3nodding 4laugh heart heart


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