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One For Two (Short Story)
The wind had blow the thin tree aside as two boys sat in their favorite spot. Zach and Jack sat upon the rock talking about last nights Movie. They had been the best of friends their entire lives. Almost inseparable. Jack stood up and began to reenact the monster. "He was all stomping and crushing the cars. ROAR!" Zach laughed and began to be the robot.

"But the robot was shooting the monster down. Pshew pshew!" He flicked Jack with his fingers as he made the sounds. Jack screamed ow and shoved Zach. "Hey. Why did you push me? It's just a little flick. What are you a girl?" Jack jumped back and got angry.

"I'm no girl. I'm more boy then you are. You're the little girl. I heard you crying during the movie. Crying for your mommy." Jack laughed hard as Zach got mad. "I can't believe I let you watch it." Zach pushed him and Jack fell into the dirt.

"I let you watch it. After all. It was my idea to rent it." Jack looked madder and grabbed Zach's arms. They both wrestled around in the dirt for over ten minutes. Jack hit his head on a rock and it bled. Zack was thrown into the tree and it scraped the back of his head. Jack stood up and began to run dead foreword at Zach. Screaming as he ran.

"I'm going to kill you! I hate you so much! I wish we were never friends!" He tackled Zach and began punching him in the stomach. Zach was hurting from each blow. He soon was able to kick Jack off. Jack rolled down the hill and looked up with an angry face. Zach ran to his book bag and reached in. Jack walked up behind him and tried to grab him. Zach spun around to fast and had a gun pointing into Jacks chest.

"I'm going to shoot you. Shoot you DEAD!" He cried as he held the gun. Jack grabbed his friends head and pulled him foreword pressing the gun into his chest further. In a flash the gun went off. Jack fell to the dirt and laid there bleeding. Zach turned pail and tears ran down his face. "I...I'm sor..sorry." He cried and fell to his knees clutching the gun tightly. He knew he would be beaten for stealing the gun and killed for killing his best friend. He pointed the gun to his chest and fired away. As the bullet ripped through him and he laid next to his friend. Both bleeding from the same wound. His eyes began to give away. Slipping into death. Jack vanished in a flash.

Months later as the doctors examined his body and brain. Doing countless tests to find out why the little boy called Zach killed himself. Years later only one tombstone can be found. Zach's best and only friend never died that day. He couldn't die. Cause he never existed. The doctors found after their blood studies that Zach was a high case of Scitsophrenia.

copyWrite 2004 - Zach Baker (Based on Concept by Kevin)






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FinalxForm
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 11:49am
You a crazy man!


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 10:20am
O.O Holy ********! Talk about shizophrenia being deadly. *sighs* Poor Zach. Very good plot twist for the ending. *feels bad for Zach..and his imaginary friend*



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