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Take It Slow


The world has come upon me all of a sudden,
just way too fast.

It seems like everyone's in a hurry,
to get their life into place.

But not me baby, I like to take it easy,
I'd like to get to know you.

Don't rush too fast, I wanna make it last,
just baby take, it, slow....

Chorus:
Takin' it slow
Yeah, takin' oh, so, slow
Takin' it slowohoh
Just take, it, slow

this is just the begining part of a song im currently writing. im also working on the guitar part of it (which is played all in bass) which is working out very well. id like any comments please on what you think of my song and how i could change it. i also know that some stuff doesn't rhyme but i dont give a s**t.






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blackclover-blindluck
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 11, 2008 @ 05:24pm
hey not bad didn't know you were writing songs very good but you could teck the intro a bit more like second versure a little weak but hay what the ******** I know any way very good ninja


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