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My Journal of Completely Insane Randomness!
This will be where I write whatever i fell like writing when I'm bored or something.
An account of Roxas's life, by me! :P
Preview

The rain was coming down like bullets, drenching anyone who was unlucky enough to be out in it. A lone figure stood in the shadows, waiting. He had a hood on his cloak, but wasn't using it, so his blonde hair was plastered against his face and neck. He stood motionless, not wanting to attract any attention to himself.
Suddenly, and seemingly from nowhere, another figure walked up to him. The other was smart enough to have worn his hood. He instructed the blonde to do the same.
"Don't change the subject." the blonde hissed, "Now where is he?"
"Why?" the other asked smugly. "You afraid he's gone off and killed himself?"
"N-no." the blonde lied. "I know you know where he is, now tell me."
"Or what?" that was a mistake, and he knew it as soon as he'd said it. But he didn't show it on his face. Not that you could see his face, for his hood was pulled over it.
The blonde summoned two blades and said angrily, "Tell me, or I'll cut you to pieces!"
"Now, now. Let's be rational." the other cooed.
"Just tell me already."
"I think not." the other said, summonig his own blade. The blonde jumped back as if he'd expected as much.
"Fine. You'll regret it." the blonde sneered.
"Well then. Show me what you've got."

It suddenly started to lessen with the rain, and the hooded one revealed his face, and bright silver hair. He was also blindfolded. Even though he couldn't see, he could still fight.
" Bring it on!" the blonde said. He rushed at the other, who quickly blocked and counter attacked. The blonde was thrown back, but didn't fall. He ran again, this time getting a good shot at him.
"Quit fooling around!" The blonde yelled.
"Whats wrong Sora?" the silver-haired, named Riku,said. He knew this wasn't his name. But he had to try it. "Are you done already? Pretty pathetic." The blonde seemed not to notice he had been called Sora when it wasn't his name. "What are you talking about? You're the one who's losing." He said, without meaning to. He quickly put his hand over his mouth, not knowing why he had said that.
"You really are his nobody..." said Riku. He knew this would make the blonde mad. "I guess I have to trust DiZ." The blonde clenched his fist and yelled, "Why do you keep talking about him?! I'm me! I'm Roxas!" and so in anger 'Roxas' ran at Riku. He tried to jump-attack but Riku dodged it with ease. Roxas turned and tried to knock the other off balance. Riku blocked it and slid backwards a good 10 feet. He fell to his knees, huffing with exhaustion.
"You can't beat me, no matter how much you try!" Roxas yelled.
"I guess so..." said Riku. " Looks like I have to do it."
"Do what?" Roxas said.
"The power sitting in my heart...," Riku said as he stood up, and pulled off his blindfold."The power suppressed by my heart...if I were to be someone else..." and with those words he threw back his head, as darkness encircled him. Roxas could only watch as Riku transformed himself. Suddenly as the darkness faded, Roxas could see that Riku looked very much different now. He was older, and with slightly whiter hair. He was floating now too. He was not Riku at all. He had also called forth a gaurdian. Roxas waited for him to glide over and Roxas would beat him yet again, but Riku did not glide over. No, he traveled over there so fast, Roxas never saw him untill he was right in front of his face. Roxas was frozen with fear. 'Riku crossed his arms. His gaurdin grabbed Roxas, so he couldn't move his arms. it's hands were so huge that while it was holding his arms, it was also choking him.It raised him high above Riku's head, squeezing every last fiber that Roxas held onto life with. Almost. Roxas dropped his weapons. As they touched the ground the dissappeared in a flurry of sparkles.
"The power of Darkness." Riku said simply, though Roxas could no longer hear him. He had blacked out. He dismissed his gaurdian, as he lay ROxas down on the ground to wait for DiZ. Soon, out of a dark portal, a man appeared, in a red ensamble with a red ribbon tied over his face so that only one eye was visible. Riku quickly put his hood up so that Diz could not see his 'dark form.' DiZ swiftly walked over to him. he surveyed the scene quietly.
"He sensed Sora." Riku said. He was turned away from Diz so that Diz could not see him at all.
"Did he say that he hated Sora?" Diz asked, but did not wait for a reply. " What a joke." he laughed. " A Nobody cannot feel emotion."
"If he were to meet Sora..." Riku began. " That might be different."


Roxas awoke in his room, the sun was shining in the window.
"Another dream about him..." he said. He looked at his window, looking out into the city. Roxas sat up and and opened the window. He marveled at the city; he loved how beautiful it was in the morning.
"Twilight Town. My only real home." he said to himself.
"Hey, Roxas, come on, everyone's waiting!" someone from below shouted. He looked down, to see his friend Olette. She was wearing her favorite orange shirt and khaki capris. Her brown hair was always over her shoulders.
"Ok, I'll be there in a minute!" he called back. She waved and ran off down the alley. Roxas hopped off his bed and got dressed in his favorite green pants and black shirt with a tan jacket over it. He had two cloth rings and a bracelet too. Now that he was ready he raced out the front door, his footsteps echoing in the lonely alley. He knew exactly where he was headed. He and his friends had called it the usual place, because it was where they went to hang out everyday.






User Comments: [6]
Chris Kiko
Community Member





Sat Sep 22, 2007 @ 04:54am


WOW, ur very good!!!! Now I feel embarrased of my story, lol. Gawd, its exellent, and it has many good adjectives and that stuff, i really like it ^_^


Oh so Toxiic
Community Member





Thu Sep 27, 2007 @ 10:36pm


Your writing is wonderful.
I love your ideas
Just a few pointers though
Try not to rush your scenes.
Its fine now, but if you slow it down a little and put more vivid details in it
It will be beautiful
...
Otherwise
Awesome job


XAelitaX
Community Member





Fri Sep 28, 2007 @ 11:41pm


Ok, thanks ^_^. It realy really helps.


bboyaireek
Community Member





Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 03:34am


awesome! nice did u find dis somewhere else? cuz it hard to find some one who is a great writer


XAelitaX
Community Member





Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 04:34pm


No. I am basically writing about the life of someone from my favorite game, but it's not exactly the same. The fight scene was from a reference vid.


User Comments: [6]
 
 
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