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Poetry with meaning will be posted by me every now and then. Make sure to take a look.
"i'll always be with you"
there was a couple making out behind a tree after school.

they were supposed to be heading home.

it started to rain.

they didn't care and kept on kissing

lightning started to strike,

and they could both hear thunder

water was dropping down on them

but they didn't care

they started kissing more and more

it was getting hot between them

the boy pushed the girl onto the tree

and put his arms around her.

as soon as his lips touched her lips again,

lightning struck the tree and they both

fell unconsious.

the janitor found them behind the tree

they were transfered to a hospital nearby

the boy woke up,

but the girl was still unconsious

the boy was very guilty

the girls kidney started to fail because of the lightning volt

the doctors tried everything to save her.

the boy decided to donate his kidney

the blood matched

his parents said not to,

because he would die

but the boy was determined

it was his fault and they all knew it

before they went into surgery,

the girl woke up

she asked what was going on

nobody told her

the docotrs said that they were going to just check if something was wrong.

she believed them

they didnt tell her that her kidney was failing

the boy closed his eyes and prayed.

the girl and boy held hands

"we're going to be okay" he told her

"i know" she replied

"i love you very much. you know that" he said

"i love you as much as you do" she said

"ill always be with you" he said

"and me too" she said

they were put to sleep

a tear slid down the boys cheeks as the doctors started the surgery

a tear slid down the girls cheek too

when the doctors took the kidney out of the boy,

two more tears fell on his cheeks as he died...

as the doctors finished the surgery,

they heard the girl whisper,

"i'll always be with you"

and her heart stopped beating.






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Dante 1209
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 07, 2007 @ 03:37am
oh my god that was so sad!
crying


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